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7/14/2004 c1 Didi
dear writer,
I think your poem is quite good and well packed with details. In your revision of this poem or on your next poem I think your words would be more powerful if you could condense your thoughts into consise phrases. Try it and let me know how it turns out!
good work,
didi
6/28/2004 c1 anonomase Is that how you spell it
This sounds like a journal/diary entry...
6/3/2004 c1 33aeolyn
Its original and I can understand how you feel being the one child who is ignored for the greater part of your life.

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