7/14/2004 c1 Didi
dear writer,
I think your poem is quite good and well packed with details. In your revision of this poem or on your next poem I think your words would be more powerful if you could condense your thoughts into consise phrases. Try it and let me know how it turns out!
good work,
didi

6/3/2004 c1 33aeolyn
Its original and I can understand how you feel being the one child who is ignored for the greater part of your life.