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6/17/2004 c1 46inquistrix
i love the first stanza. the imagery rocks like nothing else...but the 2nd is a bit odd. try "death in my sight/death in my ears/death in my lungs" (breath sounds a little weird)what sayest thou, friend?
6/13/2004 c1 13hauntingtheliving
wow o_O;; thats awesome..disturbing but good..reminds me of the dead cat that was under the trailer next door for almost two weeks..*shudders*
either way, good poem, i wanna read more..
6/10/2004 c1 81daphnegray78
Wow. Vivid imagery...I cam almost picture. Great work. :o)
6/10/2004 c1 467xoxkissxofxdeathxox
this is good. i like the description, powerful words. keep writing!
6/9/2004 c1 Brandy Bear
thats a little gross not a very pretty mental pic. but good poem
6/5/2004 c1 137Ria Mala
Descriptive...haha grossly descriptive, but it paints a picture. Thanks. :P
6/4/2004 c1 simpleplan13
well the beginning part is definately... well described
I liek the end though!
6/3/2004 c1 5Eagle Seance
yikes! hehe i loved that.

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