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7/4/2005 c1 13Vaseline
That was so sweet reminds me of my bf for some reason anyways im sorry i cant give you any suggestions to help it flow more i thought it was nice the way it is =D Ash
7/7/2004 c1 Turbo Cookie
TURBO COOKIE- yeah being to lazy to sign in.. . . .
anyways, that is a wonderfully beautiful poem ^^ that's for reviewing my stuff! *gives cookie*
KOJI- Watch out she can't cook!
TC- oh and by the way, just incase you didn't get the author's note, my name will soon be changed to Black Phoenix ^^ bye bye
6/4/2004 c1 Hawklen
I like your peom but but you can do to make it better and flow nicely is to add more adjectives

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