for Disguise Frees Thy Soul6/13/2004 c2 
1fay and cae
Hey, it's me again...great chapter...but a little of the short side! Write more! Oh yeah, great way to start the chapter..."two gorillas arm-wrestled" sounds familiar to me!
-fay and cae
P.S. Hope you update soon!
1fay and caeHey, it's me again...great chapter...but a little of the short side! Write more! Oh yeah, great way to start the chapter..."two gorillas arm-wrestled" sounds familiar to me!
-fay and cae
P.S. Hope you update soon!
6/12/2004 c2 Finnigan Irish
I think you had I GREAT story and an update would do me a world of good!
I think you had I GREAT story and an update would do me a world of good!
6/7/2004 c1 fay and cae
Interesting start...very intriguing... Love how you intertwine Leanne's thoughts with quotes. It's ironic that the people who hear everything are the quiet ones in school. Just letting you know, this story is not a piece of "crap work," rather, I thinks it has a very interesting start. Don't put yourself down! That was a great line to end with the chapter with. Hope I see more of this story/diary!
-fay and cae
P.S. Great Title! "Disguise Frees Thy Soul" Love it!
Interesting start...very intriguing... Love how you intertwine Leanne's thoughts with quotes. It's ironic that the people who hear everything are the quiet ones in school. Just letting you know, this story is not a piece of "crap work," rather, I thinks it has a very interesting start. Don't put yourself down! That was a great line to end with the chapter with. Hope I see more of this story/diary!
-fay and cae
P.S. Great Title! "Disguise Frees Thy Soul" Love it!