for The Reinvenion of Imperfection6/6/2004 c1 
47Mac Attack
nice poem. Little sad. Little morbid. Pretty morbid actually. Pretty too. Nice. Nice Kat. I am watching Eurotrip. It is dumb. But funny. Good poem though. Is this about you? I hope not. Cuz then you would be dead. Oh well. I know your not dead. I'm talking to you. Ok well read mine now. Good job i liked alot.
47Mac Attacknice poem. Little sad. Little morbid. Pretty morbid actually. Pretty too. Nice. Nice Kat. I am watching Eurotrip. It is dumb. But funny. Good poem though. Is this about you? I hope not. Cuz then you would be dead. Oh well. I know your not dead. I'm talking to you. Ok well read mine now. Good job i liked alot.
6/5/2004 c1 29Hangman
This has to be one of the most beautiful things Ive ever read. It may be partially due to the fact that Radiohead is playing and 2 of my friends feel like dying and Im depressed, but I love this poem. I know you get lots of reviews about how good your work is, and Id love to contradict just because of my nature, but I cant find fault in this poem. The subject matter is beautiful and the ending just finishes it off cleanly. Nicely written.
Cam
29HangmanThis has to be one of the most beautiful things Ive ever read. It may be partially due to the fact that Radiohead is playing and 2 of my friends feel like dying and Im depressed, but I love this poem. I know you get lots of reviews about how good your work is, and Id love to contradict just because of my nature, but I cant find fault in this poem. The subject matter is beautiful and the ending just finishes it off cleanly. Nicely written.
Cam