for Stars11/18/2004 c1 
13Black-Passion
i really like it a lot, although i dont quite understand it... but maybe if i wasnt watching a movie right now then i'd be able to concentrate right now. anyhoo. i like your word choice very much, but the title doesnt do it for me. i odnt really know what it should be instead, but i dont like "stars" at all. maybe you could take something out of the 3rd stanza, like "vapors far away". also "surly" should be "surely".
13Black-Passioni really like it a lot, although i dont quite understand it... but maybe if i wasnt watching a movie right now then i'd be able to concentrate right now. anyhoo. i like your word choice very much, but the title doesnt do it for me. i odnt really know what it should be instead, but i dont like "stars" at all. maybe you could take something out of the 3rd stanza, like "vapors far away". also "surly" should be "surely".
7/21/2004 c1 194Aslan Israel
except for the last line (kinda cause of the sudden no-rhyme, but that's not a bad thing.) great poem.
194Aslan Israelexcept for the last line (kinda cause of the sudden no-rhyme, but that's not a bad thing.) great poem.
7/15/2004 c1 79Summerdazed
yes, no wonder it's you like it, it's great! I loved it! there's so many beautiful pictures here! And yeah i'm CRAZY 'bout LOTR too!
review me if you're free!
=summerdazed=
79Summerdazedyes, no wonder it's you like it, it's great! I loved it! there's so many beautiful pictures here! And yeah i'm CRAZY 'bout LOTR too!
review me if you're free!
=summerdazed=
6/13/2004 c1 laerai
I loved this one! Heavy on the symbolism, great rhyme scheme, really descriptive! Awesome job!
I loved this one! Heavy on the symbolism, great rhyme scheme, really descriptive! Awesome job!
6/6/2004 c1 Ericalyn
Okay, I have read all of your poems and am completely captivated by all of them. I think this one and the ocean and war one are my favorites! Sorry for my bad english! But Great job!
Okay, I have read all of your poems and am completely captivated by all of them. I think this one and the ocean and war one are my favorites! Sorry for my bad english! But Great job!
6/5/2004 c1 8forgottenmoon831
Great poem, I like the rhyming in this one! I also liked how you compared the star to hope. I see you like The Lord of the Rings, I guessed by your name, :) I love LotR too! Sorry, got off topic, anyways, awesome poem!
8forgottenmoon831Great poem, I like the rhyming in this one! I also liked how you compared the star to hope. I see you like The Lord of the Rings, I guessed by your name, :) I love LotR too! Sorry, got off topic, anyways, awesome poem!