for Wintertime7/17/2004 c1 
40singingspeechless
interesting...i don't care for this one as much as ur other ones but it's not bad at all. i can see that you are one of those ppl inspired by nature (i'm not criticizing you-i promise- i think it's a cool thing)
40singingspeechlessinteresting...i don't care for this one as much as ur other ones but it's not bad at all. i can see that you are one of those ppl inspired by nature (i'm not criticizing you-i promise- i think it's a cool thing)
7/15/2004 c1 79Summerdazed
your poems could be called pictures painted with beautiful words...breath-taking.
=summerdazed=
79Summerdazedyour poems could be called pictures painted with beautiful words...breath-taking.
=summerdazed=
6/22/2004 c1 00Anonymous00
You have a knack for making poems! This one is excellent! I like it a lot. Good work!
You have a knack for making poems! This one is excellent! I like it a lot. Good work!
6/20/2004 c1 128Zainab
I like how your poems are short, but they're to the point, and they're very poetic. (yes that might sound cliche i guess but it's true). Meaning, that there really isn't a bluntness to them, but the words flow together. Like Tolkien's :)
128ZainabI like how your poems are short, but they're to the point, and they're very poetic. (yes that might sound cliche i guess but it's true). Meaning, that there really isn't a bluntness to them, but the words flow together. Like Tolkien's :)
6/7/2004 c1 8forgottenmoon831
I love all you poems, they're so good! This one had great imagery too, I think all your poems do! And that's what great poets do, they create pictures in their reader's minds. You are definitely a gifted poet, you're on my fav authors list!
8forgottenmoon831I love all you poems, they're so good! This one had great imagery too, I think all your poems do! And that's what great poets do, they create pictures in their reader's minds. You are definitely a gifted poet, you're on my fav authors list!