8/2/2004 c1 1Genius-Ben
hm... It's strange but I actually found myself liking this... beyond that, I don't think I have any comment...
Bravo.

6/8/2004 c1 150SpawnMeister666
You're right. It is kind of weird.
I like weird.
But then, you knew that already, right?
Spawny

6/5/2004 c1 89lalamushu
this is in an interesting format for a poem. i don't think i've seen something like this. it's got a sense of originality in it, an that's really cool. it's got a rough look to it, like...i dunno, it's just pretty raw, and i like this style. keep writing.