for Oceans and War7/21/2004 c1 
194Aslan Israel
The first part really describes the ocean perfectly. The one about war as well. along with new beginnings. great job.
194Aslan IsraelThe first part really describes the ocean perfectly. The one about war as well. along with new beginnings. great job.
7/15/2004 c1 79Summerdazed
ahh...very hard to choose which is better...i think i'll go with the second one. :O)
=summerdazed=
79Summerdazedahh...very hard to choose which is better...i think i'll go with the second one. :O)
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6/20/2004 c1 128Zainab
"And smote the surface glittering
Of endless waves and shores unseen."
That was my favorite part, not sure why though. I don't know what to say in any of your reviews anymore, all your poems are really good
128Zainab"And smote the surface glittering
Of endless waves and shores unseen."
That was my favorite part, not sure why though. I don't know what to say in any of your reviews anymore, all your poems are really good
6/7/2004 c1 8forgottenmoon831
Wow, that was beautiful, I love the way you write! You are truly talented in poetry! You have words of wisdom just like the elves! And that's a great compliment! Keep writing! You're on my favorite authors list!
8forgottenmoon831Wow, that was beautiful, I love the way you write! You are truly talented in poetry! You have words of wisdom just like the elves! And that's a great compliment! Keep writing! You're on my favorite authors list!
6/6/2004 c1 Ericalyn
They are both really good. Why do you need to put them together? They sound fine just the way they are.
They are both really good. Why do you need to put them together? They sound fine just the way they are.