
6/10/2004 c1
75Franken
Flows very well, I liked it. I'd try to avoid using melt twice, but other than that it was very good!
-Franken-

Flows very well, I liked it. I'd try to avoid using melt twice, but other than that it was very good!
-Franken-
6/8/2004 c1 Lexy
Nice. I like it!
Nice. I like it!