for Barren Despair7/21/2004 c1 
194Aslan Israel
I like it short, but if you really worked on it, you could probably make it into something more. It really describes Mordor perfectly, though. good job.
194Aslan IsraelI like it short, but if you really worked on it, you could probably make it into something more. It really describes Mordor perfectly, though. good job.
7/15/2004 c1 79Summerdazed
in 2 seconds? it's a record then! lol, and did i mention? You're my latest fav. poet on the site! keep writing!
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79Summerdazedin 2 seconds? it's a record then! lol, and did i mention? You're my latest fav. poet on the site! keep writing!
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6/8/2004 c1 8forgottenmoon831
That was really good actually! It does describe Mordor very well! Just a desolate, barren, hopeless place! Great job! You wrote it in like 2 seconds? Wow, that's amazing! I have to think so long for a good poem to pop up even if it's short like this one, I can't just write it that fast like you! Keep it up!
8forgottenmoon831That was really good actually! It does describe Mordor very well! Just a desolate, barren, hopeless place! Great job! You wrote it in like 2 seconds? Wow, that's amazing! I have to think so long for a good poem to pop up even if it's short like this one, I can't just write it that fast like you! Keep it up!