for Just Plain Tired7/11/2004 c1 
612simpleplan13
awesome repition and rhyming... great poem.. I know that feeling my half-sis gets away with everything... that last stanza sums it all up nicely!
612simpleplan13awesome repition and rhyming... great poem.. I know that feeling my half-sis gets away with everything... that last stanza sums it all up nicely!
7/8/2004 c1 107justaforgottenface37
I like this poem alot... the feeling of repitition is great, and i see that the rythim of this poem is great, and most importantly, i like how you're stright to the point with how you feel... it's hard to make a metaphorical poem with symoblism, but it's even hard to be stright to the point and still catch the interest of someone... good job.
- Addison Spear (justaforgottenface37)
P.S: I know this poem is sad and all, but i can't help of think of the song "tired" from the movie "Blazing Saddles"... sorry for being a dick but it just reminded me of that a little bit...
good job!
107justaforgottenface37I like this poem alot... the feeling of repitition is great, and i see that the rythim of this poem is great, and most importantly, i like how you're stright to the point with how you feel... it's hard to make a metaphorical poem with symoblism, but it's even hard to be stright to the point and still catch the interest of someone... good job.
- Addison Spear (justaforgottenface37)
P.S: I know this poem is sad and all, but i can't help of think of the song "tired" from the movie "Blazing Saddles"... sorry for being a dick but it just reminded me of that a little bit...
good job!
6/19/2004 c1 147hiding behind amber eyes
wow. ur poem is great but i feel reely bad. i no how familys can be and your sis should have to pay 2. is u wanna talk about it im here, if not thats ok.
ps-did ya get my letter? oh, and i can't read poetic life b/c its R! sry!
147hiding behind amber eyeswow. ur poem is great but i feel reely bad. i no how familys can be and your sis should have to pay 2. is u wanna talk about it im here, if not thats ok.
ps-did ya get my letter? oh, and i can't read poetic life b/c its R! sry!
6/18/2004 c1 Bronwen Ackeley
wow! this a great poem...once again, you've created something that just leaks emotion and once again, I LOVE IT! Very beautiful and written straight from the heart!:) Hope things get better for you and you know that im always there if you need somone to listen:) great work tho!
wow! this a great poem...once again, you've created something that just leaks emotion and once again, I LOVE IT! Very beautiful and written straight from the heart!:) Hope things get better for you and you know that im always there if you need somone to listen:) great work tho!
6/10/2004 c1 13Kitty-Kat4life
hey this os awesome! i love it so much, i hope all the hsit gets better soon and yu know i'm, always here for you to talk and oh yea almost forgot
CANT WAIT TO SEE YU! lol
13Kitty-Kat4lifehey this os awesome! i love it so much, i hope all the hsit gets better soon and yu know i'm, always here for you to talk and oh yea almost forgot
CANT WAIT TO SEE YU! lol
6/10/2004 c1 Kaitlyn
OMG! one of ur best, defiantely one of your best! im sorry about all the shit u talk about...hopefully itll get better :)
OMG! one of ur best, defiantely one of your best! im sorry about all the shit u talk about...hopefully itll get better :)
6/8/2004 c1 6RedHotHope
this may be one of my faves. dont worry about the repetitions, that help make is great. i hope you feel better.
6RedHotHopethis may be one of my faves. dont worry about the repetitions, that help make is great. i hope you feel better.