
7/17/2004 c1
40singingspeechless
that's so pretty...its like i'm in a fairy tale as i read it...great job!

that's so pretty...its like i'm in a fairy tale as i read it...great job!
7/15/2004 c1
79Summerdazed
aw you know, our hero Mr.Tolkien would've been so proud of you...
=summerdazed=

aw you know, our hero Mr.Tolkien would've been so proud of you...
=summerdazed=
6/20/2004 c1
128Zainab
I love your poems! And they do remind me of lotr, not with the characters or anything, but with the scenery, another job well done!

I love your poems! And they do remind me of lotr, not with the characters or anything, but with the scenery, another job well done!
6/13/2004 c1 laerai
I like the last stanza. I like the descriptive word choices. I do think that its a bit repetitive though.
I like the last stanza. I like the descriptive word choices. I do think that its a bit repetitive though.
6/9/2004 c1
8forgottenmoon831
Elbereth, I don't know how you do it! Seriously, I don't know how to describe it, but your way of using words is just beautiful! Such great imagery, such great rhyming, it sounds mystical! I don't know what else to say, keep it up! I MUST read more of your poems!

Elbereth, I don't know how you do it! Seriously, I don't know how to describe it, but your way of using words is just beautiful! Such great imagery, such great rhyming, it sounds mystical! I don't know what else to say, keep it up! I MUST read more of your poems!