for My Happy Ending8/19/2004 c13 
2blueskywillow
I really like this story, it's very orginal because it seems like you have 3 different types of love stories wrapped up into one great story.
You have the 'Grease' theme - girl meets guy on holiday falls in love then has to leave him and suddenly they go to the same school causing loads of problems. (CK and Justin)
Then you have the 'love/hate' theme - guy and girl fight all the time and hate each other and readers desperatley want them to realise they are made for each other (CK and Scott)
Finally you have the 'Partner in crime' theme - guy and girl work together to break apart a relationship and readers want that relationship to work because all the characters want is love and they could find it in each other. (CK and Jake)
So all in all I really like this story because I really don't know who I want CK to end up with, plus she seems like a real character a bit looped at times but thats what makes her real. So please update soon so I can see which theme direction this story goes in. I hope this review helps!
Eimear
2blueskywillowI really like this story, it's very orginal because it seems like you have 3 different types of love stories wrapped up into one great story.
You have the 'Grease' theme - girl meets guy on holiday falls in love then has to leave him and suddenly they go to the same school causing loads of problems. (CK and Justin)
Then you have the 'love/hate' theme - guy and girl fight all the time and hate each other and readers desperatley want them to realise they are made for each other (CK and Scott)
Finally you have the 'Partner in crime' theme - guy and girl work together to break apart a relationship and readers want that relationship to work because all the characters want is love and they could find it in each other. (CK and Jake)
So all in all I really like this story because I really don't know who I want CK to end up with, plus she seems like a real character a bit looped at times but thats what makes her real. So please update soon so I can see which theme direction this story goes in. I hope this review helps!
Eimear
8/16/2004 c13 whacked
hehehe..this story just gets better and better! tho..i kinda feel like no..caroline you shouldn't try to break ppl up! thats evil...but like she does i push away those thoughts cause she's not really evil...just in love...ah well...ur writing it really good..i like this story a lot..more than i liked ur first story ...this really shows how much you have improved in developing your plot and characters as i thought the other story was too abrupt(the relationship) (also had too many characters in it)...but i love this one its really funny...update soon plz!
hehehe..this story just gets better and better! tho..i kinda feel like no..caroline you shouldn't try to break ppl up! thats evil...but like she does i push away those thoughts cause she's not really evil...just in love...ah well...ur writing it really good..i like this story a lot..more than i liked ur first story ...this really shows how much you have improved in developing your plot and characters as i thought the other story was too abrupt(the relationship) (also had too many characters in it)...but i love this one its really funny...update soon plz!
8/16/2004 c13 whacked
hehehe..this story just gets better and better! tho..i kinda feel like no..caroline you shouldn't try to break ppl up! thats evil...but like she does i push away those thoughts cause she's not really evil...just in love...ah well...ur writing it really good..i like this story a lot..more than i liked ur first story ...this really shows how much you have improved in developing your plot and characters as i thought the other story was too abrupt(the relationship) (also had too many characters in it)...but i love this one its really funny...update soon plz!
hehehe..this story just gets better and better! tho..i kinda feel like no..caroline you shouldn't try to break ppl up! thats evil...but like she does i push away those thoughts cause she's not really evil...just in love...ah well...ur writing it really good..i like this story a lot..more than i liked ur first story ...this really shows how much you have improved in developing your plot and characters as i thought the other story was too abrupt(the relationship) (also had too many characters in it)...but i love this one its really funny...update soon plz!
8/16/2004 c13 4quotata
omg... -.-;
u noe
for some reason
i see jake rescuing her though, not justin...
lol
ur welcome for thw review. i love the story~!
4quotataomg... -.-;
u noe
for some reason
i see jake rescuing her though, not justin...
lol
ur welcome for thw review. i love the story~!
8/16/2004 c13 2Little Precious
Hello! I just want to tell you how fabulous this story is! It's really captivating and the way CK tries to gain Justin's attention is so cute!
By the way, Justin sounds soo hot. hmm *drools* =) Argh! Stupid Justin... how could you hook up with the captain? By the way, love the name Justin =)
ah! The drunk guy(s) are back! Run CK, RUN! Lol, CK reminds me of this girl I don't really like... but then again, she's very different to the CK that's in your story =) Anyways, JUSTIN come and help her out here!
I look forward to reading more of this realy soon - so update! =)
Little Precious
PS - if you have time, do check out my fics =) it'd be great to know what you think of them!
2Little PreciousHello! I just want to tell you how fabulous this story is! It's really captivating and the way CK tries to gain Justin's attention is so cute!
By the way, Justin sounds soo hot. hmm *drools* =) Argh! Stupid Justin... how could you hook up with the captain? By the way, love the name Justin =)
ah! The drunk guy(s) are back! Run CK, RUN! Lol, CK reminds me of this girl I don't really like... but then again, she's very different to the CK that's in your story =) Anyways, JUSTIN come and help her out here!
I look forward to reading more of this realy soon - so update! =)
Little Precious
PS - if you have time, do check out my fics =) it'd be great to know what you think of them!
8/14/2004 c13 5lozzi1403
hey good chap. wats gonna happen wit the drunk guy? well i hope u post soon okay. hm i HATE homework. its the worst.
catch ya
~lauren~
5lozzi1403hey good chap. wats gonna happen wit the drunk guy? well i hope u post soon okay. hm i HATE homework. its the worst.
catch ya
~lauren~
8/14/2004 c13 2w1ngle55-ang3L
yaay! an update :D:D:D
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o0o..i hope the plans goin ahead okay
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O justins here! this outta get interesting :D hehe
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theres no bread in the house.. can u believe that? no bread! and im starvin coz theres nothin else for brekkie.. oh well..i gots fab stories (like yaws) to read lol
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hee.. theyre spendin time togetha (justin n caroline that is :P)
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uh oh.. drunk guy alert... drunk guy coming onto her alert i should say... lets see if justin saves the day :D
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ahahaha i love how ur makin the drunk dude actually sound drunk with his dialogue hahaha
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lol yeah.. vibratin phones fel so weird.. i mean, its not normal to have one side of ur leg just start vibrating randomly.. downright scary in fact :P
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oh no... drunk guy is back uh oh
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ah ah.. thats like.. a cliffie! ah :( not go0d.. not go0d at all :P
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go usher.. he roXxors at dancing :D:D
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neway, fab chappie.. plz plz plz update so0n! :)
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~ w1ngle55 ang3L ~
2w1ngle55-ang3Lyaay! an update :D:D:D
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o0o..i hope the plans goin ahead okay
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O justins here! this outta get interesting :D hehe
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theres no bread in the house.. can u believe that? no bread! and im starvin coz theres nothin else for brekkie.. oh well..i gots fab stories (like yaws) to read lol
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hee.. theyre spendin time togetha (justin n caroline that is :P)
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uh oh.. drunk guy alert... drunk guy coming onto her alert i should say... lets see if justin saves the day :D
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ahahaha i love how ur makin the drunk dude actually sound drunk with his dialogue hahaha
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lol yeah.. vibratin phones fel so weird.. i mean, its not normal to have one side of ur leg just start vibrating randomly.. downright scary in fact :P
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oh no... drunk guy is back uh oh
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ah ah.. thats like.. a cliffie! ah :( not go0d.. not go0d at all :P
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go usher.. he roXxors at dancing :D:D
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neway, fab chappie.. plz plz plz update so0n! :)
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~ w1ngle55 ang3L ~
8/14/2004 c13 2Arialla
Wow, I can’t believe I forgot to review the last chapter! But it was very good =). I love this. Keep up the great work!
~ Aria
2AriallaWow, I can’t believe I forgot to review the last chapter! But it was very good =). I love this. Keep up the great work!
~ Aria
8/14/2004 c13 4DeliciousAmbiguity
I love Scott =D He seems SO cute! LOL. Hope you'll be able to continue soon!
4DeliciousAmbiguityI love Scott =D He seems SO cute! LOL. Hope you'll be able to continue soon!
8/14/2004 c13 4anatidaephobiac
So the story's named after the song? That's pretty cool. hehe.
Yeah, so you've restored my faith in Justin now... He's cool. He saved her from the drunk idiot. Um... But where is he now when these other drunk idiots are coming after her? Justin! Come back!
Update soon!
4anatidaephobiacSo the story's named after the song? That's pretty cool. hehe.
Yeah, so you've restored my faith in Justin now... He's cool. He saved her from the drunk idiot. Um... But where is he now when these other drunk idiots are coming after her? Justin! Come back!
Update soon!
8/14/2004 c13 Jiro
Aw. I know I'm weird but I really wanted to see more of Scott. Lol. Jake's such a sweetie.
Dammit. I couldn't stop reading the chapter and now I'm late for work. Oh well. It was worth it. Please update soon!
Aw. I know I'm weird but I really wanted to see more of Scott. Lol. Jake's such a sweetie.
Dammit. I couldn't stop reading the chapter and now I'm late for work. Oh well. It was worth it. Please update soon!
8/14/2004 c13 30a e i o u and sometimes y
*Btw, this is psycho sapphire...just thought I'd clarify that.*
AH! IT'S THE FREAKEH GUY! COME BACK JUSTIN! *screams* Yes, I'm done, but I must also say that I'm deadly curious.
Wow, good job on updating so early ^^ Haha. YES! THE OLYMPICS! GO SPAIN! GO USA! *chants* Oh...and I guess the Australians can go too...a little...
Hmm, I'll have to think about joining a hip-hop class. One of my best friends would love that idea, maybe us two could go.
And we'll see how drama goes for me this year, I've been in billions of plays so hopefully the class will be exciting as well. Whoa, I went on and on in this review ^^ Pardon my blabber.
30a e i o u and sometimes y*Btw, this is psycho sapphire...just thought I'd clarify that.*
AH! IT'S THE FREAKEH GUY! COME BACK JUSTIN! *screams* Yes, I'm done, but I must also say that I'm deadly curious.
Wow, good job on updating so early ^^ Haha. YES! THE OLYMPICS! GO SPAIN! GO USA! *chants* Oh...and I guess the Australians can go too...a little...
Hmm, I'll have to think about joining a hip-hop class. One of my best friends would love that idea, maybe us two could go.
And we'll see how drama goes for me this year, I've been in billions of plays so hopefully the class will be exciting as well. Whoa, I went on and on in this review ^^ Pardon my blabber.
8/14/2004 c13 storiesmarket
hey doodette!
u may now refer to me as...PICO THE AMAZING VANISHING GIRL! moohahahaha. why? bcoz, we hav guests ovr, and i am very niftily disappearing but reappearing every once in a while so as to give the impression i was ALWAYS there. BOOYAH! hehehe. its such an anti-climax. the whole family just spent the last 4 hrs cleanin n cooking...well actually me and my mum cleanin n cooking and my dad running aorund yelling THEY'LL BE HERE SOON, I TELL YOU! *rolzz eys* anyway, as fascinating as you are finding my life story...ill start on the review-
interesting chappie! oo is justin going to be her knight in shining armour? hope so. those drunkards are really creepy. i really wanan try lemon n raspberry vodka now...ehehe. ive nvr had ne alchohol...coz im onli 14! ehehehe. anyway...
that lucky cap thing was really coot! i used to really hate cold play, but then my friend kept playing it ovr n ovr, and it actually grew on me...so now, secretly, i quite like them! shoosh dont tell! the scientist is the best song i reckon. I LOVE SIMPLE PLAN! they rock. i've got one of their songs- dont wanna think about u on mp3 and one day they'll release it and i'll b really happy. :) neway addicted rox!
but that was completely random n i keep gettin sidetracked. wat i want to say is, i dont mind if u give cassandra an unhappy ending coz shes mean and stole justin (unintentionally or not, that is just not cool) jake has to have a happy ending! hez a real sweetie! i wouldnt mind if ck ended up with him sumhow.
anyway now that u r duly enlightened of my life story and opinions, ill go and reappear again (amazing, isnt it?)
blak_pearl
ps YUCKK that dancing i was doing was indian...berk...it was so boring. and stupid. bob carr was at the perforamce tho! which was kinda creepy...but anyway. atm im stressin for this hip hop dance we haven't even FINISHED CHOREOGRAPHING AND THE festival we're dancing at (YES FESTIVAL, ITS A WEIRD SCHOOL THING) is on WEDNESDAY! shoot! we are so screwed. plus after we finish making it up, we have to teach it to the rest of the group plus the...resident chess club enthusaists of our year, who were practically crying on friday coz they oculdnt go to their lil chess meetings.. *mutters darkly* why we get stuck with the chess people i dunno... anyway wat kinda dancin do u do?
hey doodette!
u may now refer to me as...PICO THE AMAZING VANISHING GIRL! moohahahaha. why? bcoz, we hav guests ovr, and i am very niftily disappearing but reappearing every once in a while so as to give the impression i was ALWAYS there. BOOYAH! hehehe. its such an anti-climax. the whole family just spent the last 4 hrs cleanin n cooking...well actually me and my mum cleanin n cooking and my dad running aorund yelling THEY'LL BE HERE SOON, I TELL YOU! *rolzz eys* anyway, as fascinating as you are finding my life story...ill start on the review-
interesting chappie! oo is justin going to be her knight in shining armour? hope so. those drunkards are really creepy. i really wanan try lemon n raspberry vodka now...ehehe. ive nvr had ne alchohol...coz im onli 14! ehehehe. anyway...
that lucky cap thing was really coot! i used to really hate cold play, but then my friend kept playing it ovr n ovr, and it actually grew on me...so now, secretly, i quite like them! shoosh dont tell! the scientist is the best song i reckon. I LOVE SIMPLE PLAN! they rock. i've got one of their songs- dont wanna think about u on mp3 and one day they'll release it and i'll b really happy. :) neway addicted rox!
but that was completely random n i keep gettin sidetracked. wat i want to say is, i dont mind if u give cassandra an unhappy ending coz shes mean and stole justin (unintentionally or not, that is just not cool) jake has to have a happy ending! hez a real sweetie! i wouldnt mind if ck ended up with him sumhow.
anyway now that u r duly enlightened of my life story and opinions, ill go and reappear again (amazing, isnt it?)
blak_pearl
ps YUCKK that dancing i was doing was indian...berk...it was so boring. and stupid. bob carr was at the perforamce tho! which was kinda creepy...but anyway. atm im stressin for this hip hop dance we haven't even FINISHED CHOREOGRAPHING AND THE festival we're dancing at (YES FESTIVAL, ITS A WEIRD SCHOOL THING) is on WEDNESDAY! shoot! we are so screwed. plus after we finish making it up, we have to teach it to the rest of the group plus the...resident chess club enthusaists of our year, who were practically crying on friday coz they oculdnt go to their lil chess meetings.. *mutters darkly* why we get stuck with the chess people i dunno... anyway wat kinda dancin do u do?
8/14/2004 c13 5quiksilva brumby
Aw..u forgave me *grinz* Lol, loved this chappie - those songs r god! I LOVE COLDPLAY! *sigh* the scientist is such a great song eh? Newho, i loved the whole jacket thing, that was really cute. I swear, when a guy gives a girl his jumper/jacket/watever, it is soo a sign he likes her. Or maybe im just hyper. Either way works for me. Oh yes, i saw ur review reply to pico and yes you should read more of my story moohahah. Its nearly finished, im currently starting the second to last chappie and then there will b an epilogue so yeah. Hmm. What does rasperry vodka taste like? Sounds interesting lol, cant say ive ever had ne vodka tho..but im only 14 *sigh* lol. KEEP WRITING! u must update soon or i shall die and i will be left here, writhing on the floor with my entrails hanging out, making my nice rug al blody. Actually, its sorta maroonish coloured neway, but thats not the POINT! *sigh* im fine now. Lol, keep writing!
luv ~brumby~ xx
5quiksilva brumbyAw..u forgave me *grinz* Lol, loved this chappie - those songs r god! I LOVE COLDPLAY! *sigh* the scientist is such a great song eh? Newho, i loved the whole jacket thing, that was really cute. I swear, when a guy gives a girl his jumper/jacket/watever, it is soo a sign he likes her. Or maybe im just hyper. Either way works for me. Oh yes, i saw ur review reply to pico and yes you should read more of my story moohahah. Its nearly finished, im currently starting the second to last chappie and then there will b an epilogue so yeah. Hmm. What does rasperry vodka taste like? Sounds interesting lol, cant say ive ever had ne vodka tho..but im only 14 *sigh* lol. KEEP WRITING! u must update soon or i shall die and i will be left here, writhing on the floor with my entrails hanging out, making my nice rug al blody. Actually, its sorta maroonish coloured neway, but thats not the POINT! *sigh* im fine now. Lol, keep writing!
luv ~brumby~ xx