for My Happy Ending7/22/2004 c10 
5kassiopia59
Heehee. Great job as always, though not much going on in this chapter. But it's still good all the same as the others. I wonder what's gonna happen during the first game of soccer? was it? I can't wait to see how the game goes, with Caroline and Scott being together to do what ever they have to do. I don't know much about the game so...yea. Anyways, update soon!
5kassiopia59Heehee. Great job as always, though not much going on in this chapter. But it's still good all the same as the others. I wonder what's gonna happen during the first game of soccer? was it? I can't wait to see how the game goes, with Caroline and Scott being together to do what ever they have to do. I don't know much about the game so...yea. Anyways, update soon!
7/18/2004 c9 30a e i o u and sometimes y
Another review from me! (and this time it's from Florida.) Hope your trip was just as fun as mine =D
DANG you started school already? When did you get out? aah I'd die if I had to start x_x
But anyways...This was a fun chapter, I loved how Caroline was counting the sheep, it added a bit of color. Update as soon as ya can! Oh look, it's raining.
30a e i o u and sometimes yAnother review from me! (and this time it's from Florida.) Hope your trip was just as fun as mine =D
DANG you started school already? When did you get out? aah I'd die if I had to start x_x
But anyways...This was a fun chapter, I loved how Caroline was counting the sheep, it added a bit of color. Update as soon as ya can! Oh look, it's raining.
7/18/2004 c9 5quiksilva brumby
hehe i loved the last line it just sounded so funny =) Woohoo go chaddy! i'm v. sad 2 b back in sydney where our shopping centres r about half the size of it *sigh* o well. I am eagerly waiting the next chapter *wink* lol i can imagine many funny situations arising here.
luv ~brumby~ xx
5quiksilva brumbyhehe i loved the last line it just sounded so funny =) Woohoo go chaddy! i'm v. sad 2 b back in sydney where our shopping centres r about half the size of it *sigh* o well. I am eagerly waiting the next chapter *wink* lol i can imagine many funny situations arising here.
luv ~brumby~ xx
7/15/2004 c9 2Saggitaire
Great chapter. I love the whole cupid thing.
Hopefully the Kameron and Justin thing will turn out alright!
Plz update soon ^_^
2SaggitaireGreat chapter. I love the whole cupid thing.
Hopefully the Kameron and Justin thing will turn out alright!
Plz update soon ^_^
7/15/2004 c9 5lozzi1403
hey really great stuff. put up the next bit soon okay
plz tell me when uve posted it
catch ya
~lauren~
xoxo
5lozzi1403hey really great stuff. put up the next bit soon okay
plz tell me when uve posted it
catch ya
~lauren~
xoxo
7/14/2004 c9 5kassiopia59
Hmm...what is Caroline gonna do...
I dunno for some reason I'm starting to like this Brookes. He's interesting and I wanna know what's his deal in the story. Update soon!
5kassiopia59Hmm...what is Caroline gonna do...
I dunno for some reason I'm starting to like this Brookes. He's interesting and I wanna know what's his deal in the story. Update soon!
7/14/2004 c9 2Arialla
Hey, cute chapter! I think you deserve way more reviews than you’re getting. You’ve started school already? Wow. I won’t be starting school till almost two months later. This is great so far. I really enjoy reading it.
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By the way, do you think you could check out my story? Don’t feel obligated to; it’s just that I think I need some constructive criticism or advice from someone who’s been on the site for longer than I have. So I’d really appreciate it if you could =). Right now, its night, so I have to go. But please update soon!
~ Aria
2AriallaHey, cute chapter! I think you deserve way more reviews than you’re getting. You’ve started school already? Wow. I won’t be starting school till almost two months later. This is great so far. I really enjoy reading it.
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By the way, do you think you could check out my story? Don’t feel obligated to; it’s just that I think I need some constructive criticism or advice from someone who’s been on the site for longer than I have. So I’d really appreciate it if you could =). Right now, its night, so I have to go. But please update soon!
~ Aria
7/14/2004 c9 2Pundit
YAY! Update! It's weird to hear you talk about the school system in Australia. I had NO idea what was going on for the first couple chapters (I'm an American, I'm allowed to be slow ^_^)Anyway, this is awesome! Please update soon.
2PunditYAY! Update! It's weird to hear you talk about the school system in Australia. I had NO idea what was going on for the first couple chapters (I'm an American, I'm allowed to be slow ^_^)Anyway, this is awesome! Please update soon.
7/14/2004 c9 myworks87
Oh haha. That's funny. I love this whole web of love that you've incorporated into the story. V. cool. Lol, and Caroline is so funny. Her comments that she makes about herself make me laugh. Anyways, g2g but great job this chappie. Update quickly!
Oh haha. That's funny. I love this whole web of love that you've incorporated into the story. V. cool. Lol, and Caroline is so funny. Her comments that she makes about herself make me laugh. Anyways, g2g but great job this chappie. Update quickly!
7/14/2004 c9 4anatidaephobiac
Lol... That's mean... its funny too though. (no offense) On our team we had three people who were the permenant captains... i didn't really care though.
and then for softball (which is my fav. sport) my friend and i usually were the captains mainly because we were the only ones who knew what we were doing...
we were the people who should have been moved up to the higher team, but weren't because then the lower team wouldn't have had enough people, or even a chance at winning (my friend and i were the pitcher and catcher, which was basically the game... nobody else could pitch or catch... and believe me they tried... and it wasn't pretty)
i'm not trying to sound conceited at all, it's just that my friend and I had been playing since we were like 8 (now we're 15) and everyone else had started like... then. or the year before, with the incredibly bad town team)
anyway, my coach was really nice, but clueless about softball, so me and my friend basically coached half the time... very sad.
anyway, i've got to go, but that was an awesome chapter...
especially counting sheep... that was interesting...
update soon! (or as soon as you can since you're in school... guess what, i do the 7.5 hours of sleep thing too... except its usually more like 7.5 hours of sleep per week. not so good) but i'm on summer vacation now so i get to sleep. ;) have fun at school!... i feel mean now...)
4anatidaephobiacLol... That's mean... its funny too though. (no offense) On our team we had three people who were the permenant captains... i didn't really care though.
and then for softball (which is my fav. sport) my friend and i usually were the captains mainly because we were the only ones who knew what we were doing...
we were the people who should have been moved up to the higher team, but weren't because then the lower team wouldn't have had enough people, or even a chance at winning (my friend and i were the pitcher and catcher, which was basically the game... nobody else could pitch or catch... and believe me they tried... and it wasn't pretty)
i'm not trying to sound conceited at all, it's just that my friend and I had been playing since we were like 8 (now we're 15) and everyone else had started like... then. or the year before, with the incredibly bad town team)
anyway, my coach was really nice, but clueless about softball, so me and my friend basically coached half the time... very sad.
anyway, i've got to go, but that was an awesome chapter...
especially counting sheep... that was interesting...
update soon! (or as soon as you can since you're in school... guess what, i do the 7.5 hours of sleep thing too... except its usually more like 7.5 hours of sleep per week. not so good) but i'm on summer vacation now so i get to sleep. ;) have fun at school!... i feel mean now...)
7/14/2004 c9 PCS
I smell trouble! What is she going to do to mess everything up? And i cant figure if ur gonna match her w/ justin or jake. its perplexing! I wanna go to australia! Ur so lucky! Im stuck here in virginia and u get lots of nice weather. At least here it snows hahaha ttyl
I smell trouble! What is she going to do to mess everything up? And i cant figure if ur gonna match her w/ justin or jake. its perplexing! I wanna go to australia! Ur so lucky! Im stuck here in virginia and u get lots of nice weather. At least here it snows hahaha ttyl
7/14/2004 c9 Melskies
YAY! An update! GREAT chapter! i can't stand carly.. she is SO annoying lol i think CK is definitly right about cassandra and jake.. guess we'll see.. update when you can! :) have fun at ya formal..
YAY! An update! GREAT chapter! i can't stand carly.. she is SO annoying lol i think CK is definitly right about cassandra and jake.. guess we'll see.. update when you can! :) have fun at ya formal..
7/14/2004 c9 lilleo
yep it made perfect sense! sorry 2 be annoying but lilleo has 2 l's... ne ways keep it up fox!
yep it made perfect sense! sorry 2 be annoying but lilleo has 2 l's... ne ways keep it up fox!
7/13/2004 c8 Melskies
ok well i got myself an account with FP.com so now u don't have to email me when u update coz i have u on author alert! :) YAY! i can't wait for you to update! I'm so excited!
~MeL~
ok well i got myself an account with FP.com so now u don't have to email me when u update coz i have u on author alert! :) YAY! i can't wait for you to update! I'm so excited!
~MeL~