for My Happy Ending6/16/2004 c2 moni
hey, just a quick note to say I'm really liking how this story is turning out. I have read Loved Forever too, and thought you did a fairly good job with it but I have a feeling this one will be ten times better!
~moni
hey, just a quick note to say I'm really liking how this story is turning out. I have read Loved Forever too, and thought you did a fairly good job with it but I have a feeling this one will be ten times better!
~moni
6/15/2004 c1 
30a e i o u and sometimes y
Oh I really like the beginning of this! I'll be back to read more!
30a e i o u and sometimes yOh I really like the beginning of this! I'll be back to read more!
6/15/2004 c2 Midnight Owl
you know, i think i like this story better than loved forever. though they're both great. once again, my eyes hurt too much to leave a longer review... sorry. excellent story. update again soon?
you know, i think i like this story better than loved forever. though they're both great. once again, my eyes hurt too much to leave a longer review... sorry. excellent story. update again soon?
6/15/2004 c2 anonymous
update soon. i can't wait to see what happens next. Update your other story to. till the next chapter.
update soon. i can't wait to see what happens next. Update your other story to. till the next chapter.
6/15/2004 c2 PCS
Hey. I think its a little hard to read and there are a lot of little errors( like my instead of me.) but other then that i like it a lot!
Hey. I think its a little hard to read and there are a lot of little errors( like my instead of me.) but other then that i like it a lot!
6/15/2004 c2 7You Need More Flair
Don't feel bad about suckin at snowboarding. I suck at EVERYTHING on a board... I can't sled. Heck, I can't even boogie board...
Sad, huh?
Great job on this chapter. It was more paced, and it was entertaining.
I like that you didn't make CK very Mary-Sue-ish by making her uber great at surfing or trashketball.
And yes, I made that word up. ;)
More, please.
7You Need More FlairDon't feel bad about suckin at snowboarding. I suck at EVERYTHING on a board... I can't sled. Heck, I can't even boogie board...
Sad, huh?
Great job on this chapter. It was more paced, and it was entertaining.
I like that you didn't make CK very Mary-Sue-ish by making her uber great at surfing or trashketball.
And yes, I made that word up. ;)
More, please.
6/12/2004 c1 Finnigan Irish
Well, I must say that I enjoyed this story and am waiting for an update! It reminds me a little of Bend It Like Beckham...and I needed a good romance story! UPDATE FOR THE FANS!
Well, I must say that I enjoyed this story and am waiting for an update! It reminds me a little of Bend It Like Beckham...and I needed a good romance story! UPDATE FOR THE FANS!
6/9/2004 c1 5kassiopia59
This is getting fun! I can't wait till the summer is over and she finds out that Milano is going to her school! Ou have have to write more as soon as possible. Again...ASAP!
5kassiopia59This is getting fun! I can't wait till the summer is over and she finds out that Milano is going to her school! Ou have have to write more as soon as possible. Again...ASAP!
6/9/2004 c1 7You Need More Flair
I like this idea, even though it's one of those quintessential summer stories, but you're moving a little fast. I think you should spend a little longer developing characters before moving into the "fast-action" stuff.
Write more, please.
7You Need More FlairI like this idea, even though it's one of those quintessential summer stories, but you're moving a little fast. I think you should spend a little longer developing characters before moving into the "fast-action" stuff.
Write more, please.