for Hands Stretched in the Dark12/3/2004 c1 
65noebody
Very nice, though I'm sorry to say that the end kind of confused me. It's horror so I expeted her to be dead or soemthing or other but I liked the ending anyhow. Short but sweet, I liked your writing style. ^.^ bye!
65noebodyVery nice, though I'm sorry to say that the end kind of confused me. It's horror so I expeted her to be dead or soemthing or other but I liked the ending anyhow. Short but sweet, I liked your writing style. ^.^ bye!
6/30/2004 c1 5Systole
huh, I'm confused, but I'll review anyway, I am unsure just what happened in the end...
5Systolehuh, I'm confused, but I'll review anyway, I am unsure just what happened in the end...
6/14/2004 c1 5Eagle Seance
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful descriptions. So sad though. And the switch off the mirror and look at the light thing was inspired by a friend's words. It was intentional (ie. to stop observing mere reflections and look at things from a more objective way...) Great work-i don't think i can write something like your descriptive prose (it's not a story is it?).
5Eagle SeanceBeautiful. Absolutely beautiful descriptions. So sad though. And the switch off the mirror and look at the light thing was inspired by a friend's words. It was intentional (ie. to stop observing mere reflections and look at things from a more objective way...) Great work-i don't think i can write something like your descriptive prose (it's not a story is it?).
6/11/2004 c1 21Bloodlilly
Wonderful story. Really excellent descriptions when it comes to scenery. I liked the reference to Venus too, it was a good touch. The ending of course, is the real kicker in this one. I had to go back and read it again. It took me by surprise even though you pointed out that the story was categorized under horror. Congrats on being unpredictable.
21BloodlillyWonderful story. Really excellent descriptions when it comes to scenery. I liked the reference to Venus too, it was a good touch. The ending of course, is the real kicker in this one. I had to go back and read it again. It took me by surprise even though you pointed out that the story was categorized under horror. Congrats on being unpredictable.
6/9/2004 c1 22slave to the voices
A very good story. Your description is beautiful (description is my weak point so it's usually the first thing I notice). Thanks for participating. Nice work, keep writing.
**Slave**
22slave to the voicesA very good story. Your description is beautiful (description is my weak point so it's usually the first thing I notice). Thanks for participating. Nice work, keep writing.
**Slave**