for Bad Blood7/16/2005 c26 Kizera
Yesh very, i tend to do that ,read over my storys and stop at one point thinking "..hmm i never wrote that..oh well" lol..I like this chapter, bery interesting, hope it get;'s better, i wiunder if jamnis and gavin are going tofight or somethign with nathen and dana x_X
Yesh very, i tend to do that ,read over my storys and stop at one point thinking "..hmm i never wrote that..oh well" lol..I like this chapter, bery interesting, hope it get;'s better, i wiunder if jamnis and gavin are going tofight or somethign with nathen and dana x_X
7/13/2005 c26 
79Ashes.to.Acid
Blood prostitutes? Tsk.. what has this world come too? Well, I never pictured Dana's mom being a medium either. When I read that, my first thought was, "What the fuck?" Lol. Great twists.. keep up the good work
79Ashes.to.AcidBlood prostitutes? Tsk.. what has this world come too? Well, I never pictured Dana's mom being a medium either. When I read that, my first thought was, "What the fuck?" Lol. Great twists.. keep up the good work
7/13/2005 c26 Rae
Nice chapter.Haha and yeah it didn't take a month to write!
Nice chapter.Haha and yeah it didn't take a month to write!
7/11/2005 c25 6Medieval-Rogue
YAY!
God...Gavin is a creep.a serious *twitch* creep.
Lol, nice chapter I liked it a lot. The whole aura thing was a little hard to follow but i reread it and it made sense. I am, however, curious aout whether Michael is gay...or Nathan...
The beginning was really suspensful, I liked the whole "fang-pulling" threat she made...hehehe, I like evil like that...
Yeah, my computer had a major crash aout a month ago.it's brain dead, so I'm still waiting for it to be fixed... In the meantime, unfortunatley, The Three Powers is on hold...
Well, now I am DESPERATE for more of this story, update soon!
PS HAPPY BIRTHDAY BAD BLOOD! (I'll keep it a secret that I'm molesting Vlad and Avery...)
6Medieval-RogueYAY!
God...Gavin is a creep.a serious *twitch* creep.
Lol, nice chapter I liked it a lot. The whole aura thing was a little hard to follow but i reread it and it made sense. I am, however, curious aout whether Michael is gay...or Nathan...
The beginning was really suspensful, I liked the whole "fang-pulling" threat she made...hehehe, I like evil like that...
Yeah, my computer had a major crash aout a month ago.it's brain dead, so I'm still waiting for it to be fixed... In the meantime, unfortunatley, The Three Powers is on hold...
Well, now I am DESPERATE for more of this story, update soon!
PS HAPPY BIRTHDAY BAD BLOOD! (I'll keep it a secret that I'm molesting Vlad and Avery...)
6/29/2005 c25 52Liviania
Gavin's a touch ewwy. I don't want to molest him even when he is legal.
Livi
52LivianiaGavin's a touch ewwy. I don't want to molest him even when he is legal.
Livi
6/29/2005 c25 2Foxonfire
yes. i noticed. XD I KNEW IT WAS NATHAN AND NOT SCOTT! ...ok! so it was more of a strong hunch. -.-; me no liky Gavin-dude-person. he's cool but a perv, jerk, and smart ass. yeah. update soon!
2Foxonfireyes. i noticed. XD I KNEW IT WAS NATHAN AND NOT SCOTT! ...ok! so it was more of a strong hunch. -.-; me no liky Gavin-dude-person. he's cool but a perv, jerk, and smart ass. yeah. update soon!
6/29/2005 c25 Kizera
OMG :O...Wow Gavin is interesting but i dun like hi mthat much, Jamnis all thew way :{..I can't bleive t, i hope dana dosn't actually let him bite er _ That evil little monster! and does he realy love her sis Ari? come on don't tak e to long little lady!
OMG :O...Wow Gavin is interesting but i dun like hi mthat much, Jamnis all thew way :{..I can't bleive t, i hope dana dosn't actually let him bite er _ That evil little monster! and does he realy love her sis Ari? come on don't tak e to long little lady!
6/28/2005 c25 81TwystedFate
Wait until you work with kids five days a week: some kid'll spill his juice and you'll say something akin to:
"Ohh shi..mmer.", or "Fu..nk."
I say "Shoot" and "Jeepers" now. I talk like a six-year-old. *_*
Lovely update! Yay! Yay!
81TwystedFateWait until you work with kids five days a week: some kid'll spill his juice and you'll say something akin to:
"Ohh shi..mmer.", or "Fu..nk."
I say "Shoot" and "Jeepers" now. I talk like a six-year-old. *_*
Lovely update! Yay! Yay!
6/28/2005 c25 1Bellissimo Addio
Mwahahahahaha... I can make people laugh! Heh. Looks like Dana's in a spot of trouble... Again... lol. So it was Nathan and Michael! Who wouldv'e guessed? Gavin is an ass... Womanizer. Manizer as well to think about it... Is that even a word? *Ponders* Oh well. Heh. I'm writing a short story about a trip to Australia that I just got back from last Thursday... This oughta be random. ^_~ I had three chapters done and ready to upload, but the computer crashed and destroyed it.
1Bellissimo AddioMwahahahahaha... I can make people laugh! Heh. Looks like Dana's in a spot of trouble... Again... lol. So it was Nathan and Michael! Who wouldv'e guessed? Gavin is an ass... Womanizer. Manizer as well to think about it... Is that even a word? *Ponders* Oh well. Heh. I'm writing a short story about a trip to Australia that I just got back from last Thursday... This oughta be random. ^_~ I had three chapters done and ready to upload, but the computer crashed and destroyed it.
6/28/2005 c25 2Gayle of Genisis
Wow it took FOREVER, could you be quicker about it, oh and I love this story. I hope Dana won't belong to Gavin, he is such a fucking creep.
2Gayle of GenisisWow it took FOREVER, could you be quicker about it, oh and I love this story. I hope Dana won't belong to Gavin, he is such a fucking creep.
6/28/2005 c25 Rae
Nice chapter! Gavin is a sicko, kiddie vamp. EWW for what he said to Dana (150 + on pervert scale). Lol, i was laughing so hard at your closing thoughts. Better keep the characters away from Michael Jackson. muaha
Nice chapter! Gavin is a sicko, kiddie vamp. EWW for what he said to Dana (150 + on pervert scale). Lol, i was laughing so hard at your closing thoughts. Better keep the characters away from Michael Jackson. muaha
6/24/2005 c24 3Pineapple Chiffon Cake
Wow... it's been a while since I last read this oO;; I love the plot, I love the characters, and I love everything else. And... Michael's gay, right? Or something like that... Yeah. I like the way each of your characters is diverse and has a mind of their own (as opposed to some stories :: coughminecough :: where you could probably substitute any one character with another, and the whole thing would still more or less work). Keep it up! Can't wait for an update!
3Pineapple Chiffon CakeWow... it's been a while since I last read this oO;; I love the plot, I love the characters, and I love everything else. And... Michael's gay, right? Or something like that... Yeah. I like the way each of your characters is diverse and has a mind of their own (as opposed to some stories :: coughminecough :: where you could probably substitute any one character with another, and the whole thing would still more or less work). Keep it up! Can't wait for an update!