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46AngelaSolis
This was a fabulously good chapter. Yeah, really gripping. Made me go quite hot and cold ... that's a compliment! Just one thing irked me, which was why Avery and Jamnis just allowed the twins to have their way. Very unsupportive! But I guess they were just following the vampire rules.
46AngelaSolisThis was a fabulously good chapter. Yeah, really gripping. Made me go quite hot and cold ... that's a compliment! Just one thing irked me, which was why Avery and Jamnis just allowed the twins to have their way. Very unsupportive! But I guess they were just following the vampire rules.
5/27/2005 c24 2Gayle of Genisis
Don't delete anything. I was expecting Jamnis this chapter, please let hi be in the next. So what is Michael, gay or maybe Bi?
2Gayle of GenisisDon't delete anything. I was expecting Jamnis this chapter, please let hi be in the next. So what is Michael, gay or maybe Bi?
5/27/2005 c24 Rae
The irony.. Mikey is gay! Haha yeah what a cliffhanger :D
The irony.. Mikey is gay! Haha yeah what a cliffhanger :D
5/27/2005 c24 Kizera
Oh wow...i predicted :X...Hmm i'm guessing the dude kissing her brother is either jamnis or Gavin ._...or even someone else aka scott or nathen ...i dunno but hurry up and finish the next chapter, i hope Gavin dosn't try to kiss or bite Dana x_X...and what kind of powers does she have besides seeing aura and absorbing it...hurry and update!~!
Oh wow...i predicted :X...Hmm i'm guessing the dude kissing her brother is either jamnis or Gavin ._...or even someone else aka scott or nathen ...i dunno but hurry up and finish the next chapter, i hope Gavin dosn't try to kiss or bite Dana x_X...and what kind of powers does she have besides seeing aura and absorbing it...hurry and update!~!
5/27/2005 c24 6Medieval-Rogue
wow.
I mean, really...wow...michael? hmm...I actually can't guess who the vampire he's with is...
But DANG- hows THAT for a chapter ending? HELL YES, great job! I do NOT like Dana's mom...I'm glad my mom's not like that...if i ever meet someone like that...oh...homicidal intentions...
Lol. I liked the way you cleared up that Gavin was the name of Jamnis' sire, it was good. And the ending was REALLY good!
GIMME MORE! lol...
6Medieval-Roguewow.
I mean, really...wow...michael? hmm...I actually can't guess who the vampire he's with is...
But DANG- hows THAT for a chapter ending? HELL YES, great job! I do NOT like Dana's mom...I'm glad my mom's not like that...if i ever meet someone like that...oh...homicidal intentions...
Lol. I liked the way you cleared up that Gavin was the name of Jamnis' sire, it was good. And the ending was REALLY good!
GIMME MORE! lol...
5/24/2005 c23 xoesotericox
I didn't really like greg's reaction..to the whole thing. I would have thought that it wouldn't be as calm as you described it.. more dramatic..it would have..lmao..i'm talking like yoda. anyway..anticipating ariadne's reaction.
I didn't really like greg's reaction..to the whole thing. I would have thought that it wouldn't be as calm as you described it.. more dramatic..it would have..lmao..i'm talking like yoda. anyway..anticipating ariadne's reaction.
5/21/2005 c23 15Kella Trams
Yay. This chapter gave me warm fuzzies. I like seeing the more personal side of Dana in this chapter and have things kinda calm down, but always have the tension of, when is she gonna see her mom and sister and what are they gonna say? I cannot wait to find out.
15Kella TramsYay. This chapter gave me warm fuzzies. I like seeing the more personal side of Dana in this chapter and have things kinda calm down, but always have the tension of, when is she gonna see her mom and sister and what are they gonna say? I cannot wait to find out.
5/21/2005 c11 81TwystedFate
Beginner's guide to mediumship by Larry Dreller.
And as for places, just do what I do, and set *everything* you write in Olympia, Washington. It's cold. It's northern. It snows a lot. The end.
81TwystedFateBeginner's guide to mediumship by Larry Dreller.
And as for places, just do what I do, and set *everything* you write in Olympia, Washington. It's cold. It's northern. It snows a lot. The end.
5/20/2005 c23 7DemonSurfer
I've never gotten locked in a bathroom, although when I was little I accidentaly overflowed a toilet at the movie theater. It wasn't my fault!Well, obvioulsy the pickle didn't kill me. Guess it wasn't so bad after all. Never did watch Metropolis. Did you know its been 6 days since i've last reviewed? Yep.WOO-HOO! FREE MAN! FREMAN! ^_^ Today was our LAST day of school! An' I'm in 8th, so it's highschool for me in August! Yep, an' I might even convince mom ta let me tear around with green-streaked hair. Until I'm 15. Then it's gonna get white stripes, an I'm gonna wear cat-ears. I've been stuck on a fanfic recently. Stupid snag. Not as bad as it was a couple of days ago, but I'm STILL stuck on my story transition. Oh well, I've almost got it figgered out. 'Kay, I give you...A DEEP FRIED ZOMBIE BIT! NYA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HAA!
7DemonSurferI've never gotten locked in a bathroom, although when I was little I accidentaly overflowed a toilet at the movie theater. It wasn't my fault!Well, obvioulsy the pickle didn't kill me. Guess it wasn't so bad after all. Never did watch Metropolis. Did you know its been 6 days since i've last reviewed? Yep.WOO-HOO! FREE MAN! FREMAN! ^_^ Today was our LAST day of school! An' I'm in 8th, so it's highschool for me in August! Yep, an' I might even convince mom ta let me tear around with green-streaked hair. Until I'm 15. Then it's gonna get white stripes, an I'm gonna wear cat-ears. I've been stuck on a fanfic recently. Stupid snag. Not as bad as it was a couple of days ago, but I'm STILL stuck on my story transition. Oh well, I've almost got it figgered out. 'Kay, I give you...A DEEP FRIED ZOMBIE BIT! NYA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HAA!
5/19/2005 c23 Kizera
oo nice, i can't wait, i hope her sister's bf dosn't hit on her, men i casn't wait till the next ep, i hope jamnis apears in the next ep :D
oo nice, i can't wait, i hope her sister's bf dosn't hit on her, men i casn't wait till the next ep, i hope jamnis apears in the next ep :D
5/19/2005 c23 52Liviania
I liked her dad okay, even he did seem a bit clueless to Dana's feelings...I cannot wait to see her reunion with her sister and mom. Truly, I'm quite curious.
Livi
52LivianiaI liked her dad okay, even he did seem a bit clueless to Dana's feelings...I cannot wait to see her reunion with her sister and mom. Truly, I'm quite curious.
Livi
5/19/2005 c23 6Medieval-Rogue
WOOT WOOT!
Lol, nice chapter, and I feel better not being the slightly confused person I was reading this story...
And you did write an incredibly nice romance scene...very nice...LOL
I can't wait till the party...I'll BET it's the same party...hehehe...that will be great...And I definatly can't wait until the whole family meets Jammy (that rhymed...)...that will be funny. Sirel kicks Michael and everyone else's ass, lol, she was awesome with the water balloonieness...not to mention the whole...magic lust going on...grr baby gr!
~Cheers!~
6Medieval-RogueWOOT WOOT!
Lol, nice chapter, and I feel better not being the slightly confused person I was reading this story...
And you did write an incredibly nice romance scene...very nice...LOL
I can't wait till the party...I'll BET it's the same party...hehehe...that will be great...And I definatly can't wait until the whole family meets Jammy (that rhymed...)...that will be funny. Sirel kicks Michael and everyone else's ass, lol, she was awesome with the water balloonieness...not to mention the whole...magic lust going on...grr baby gr!
~Cheers!~
5/18/2005 c23 5Cyclonica
Oh what a fabulously evil ending. I do like her dad. He seems like a really nice guy. Bet him and Michael have been bonding for a while. I muchly look forward to meeting her mom and sister and sister's boyfriend. This is so ma-fabulous. Oh and I also look forward to them all meeting Jamnis. Cuz that'll just be awesome. Yes it will. Keep up the ma-fabulous work.
5CyclonicaOh what a fabulously evil ending. I do like her dad. He seems like a really nice guy. Bet him and Michael have been bonding for a while. I muchly look forward to meeting her mom and sister and sister's boyfriend. This is so ma-fabulous. Oh and I also look forward to them all meeting Jamnis. Cuz that'll just be awesome. Yes it will. Keep up the ma-fabulous work.