for Bad Blood2/16/2012 c10 
2Shirou Okawa
Oh boy. Memory lapse suck. Hopefully this one will play out better. -nods-
2Shirou OkawaOh boy. Memory lapse suck. Hopefully this one will play out better. -nods-
2/16/2012 c7 Shirou Okawa
Oh boy lol. That is just too darn funny. The clown thing and...omg I laughed so hard I cried. And the blood thing is kinda OMG too. I am so hooked now. :D
Oh boy lol. That is just too darn funny. The clown thing and...omg I laughed so hard I cried. And the blood thing is kinda OMG too. I am so hooked now. :D
2/16/2012 c6 Shirou Okawa
I really like the character Dana. She's spunky and awesome. The best kind of women. I just wanted to tell u that. Nice chappie btw. Cant wait to see what happens in the next one. :D
I really like the character Dana. She's spunky and awesome. The best kind of women. I just wanted to tell u that. Nice chappie btw. Cant wait to see what happens in the next one. :D
2/16/2012 c5 Shirou Okawa
Lol. I think someone might have a slightish crush on her bff's on again off again love interest. But I could be wrong. I enjoyed it :D
Lol. I think someone might have a slightish crush on her bff's on again off again love interest. But I could be wrong. I enjoyed it :D
2/16/2012 c4 Shirou Okawa
Oi I can only imagine the beat down Dana is gonna attempt on him. Yet another awesome chappie.
Oi I can only imagine the beat down Dana is gonna attempt on him. Yet another awesome chappie.
2/16/2012 c3 Shirou Okawa
Nice chappie. The bite scene was not weak it had me digging my toes into the carpet and reading intently. :D
Nice chappie. The bite scene was not weak it had me digging my toes into the carpet and reading intently. :D
9/10/2011 c35 xkcbby
I cannot believe this ended! Ahhh. I really love Jamnis and Dana. It was a exciting read what with the sexual tension and killing spree and all, but I'm not sure that it was memorable. It was definitely well written, and I am despaired to have come to the end. Nonetheless, I did finish reading this and that says something since I an extremely picky reader.
Well done. On my fair share of vampire reads, I haven't found one other than this where vampires have auras, constantly drink out of necks, etc. It had a unique twist. Again, I must be honest and say that this did not emanate a breathtaking, ethereal feel that would have made this all the more stunning and memorable.
That said, well written! I feel as if I'm repeating myself. Cheers, and keep writing(;
I cannot believe this ended! Ahhh. I really love Jamnis and Dana. It was a exciting read what with the sexual tension and killing spree and all, but I'm not sure that it was memorable. It was definitely well written, and I am despaired to have come to the end. Nonetheless, I did finish reading this and that says something since I an extremely picky reader.
Well done. On my fair share of vampire reads, I haven't found one other than this where vampires have auras, constantly drink out of necks, etc. It had a unique twist. Again, I must be honest and say that this did not emanate a breathtaking, ethereal feel that would have made this all the more stunning and memorable.
That said, well written! I feel as if I'm repeating myself. Cheers, and keep writing(;
7/8/2011 c35 4J.L. Lofthouse
Hey this story is great but the only thing is why jamnis didn't ring her when he went away but rang her best friend instead but other than that it was great well done
4J.L. LofthouseHey this story is great but the only thing is why jamnis didn't ring her when he went away but rang her best friend instead but other than that it was great well done
1/26/2011 c12 48Kantsu-chan
I love your story except you really should do some editing before you post. It would help a lot. Also I love Jamnis, but Dana is a bit annoying. What's with her dislike of vamps. Is she nuts! I love vampire stories that are unique and fun to Read and write. I am actually in the middle of a few vamp stories myself. I want to be published.
Well, anyways, sorry for my psycho rambling, but I really enjoyed reading your story and please keep at it! You are well skilled and wow over 100,0 words, that is a lot.
Well, bye for now.
48Kantsu-chanI love your story except you really should do some editing before you post. It would help a lot. Also I love Jamnis, but Dana is a bit annoying. What's with her dislike of vamps. Is she nuts! I love vampire stories that are unique and fun to Read and write. I am actually in the middle of a few vamp stories myself. I want to be published.
Well, anyways, sorry for my psycho rambling, but I really enjoyed reading your story and please keep at it! You are well skilled and wow over 100,0 words, that is a lot.
Well, bye for now.
8/31/2010 c1 Natasha
So a couple of years later... I found this story as I am desperately trying to find some new reading material and good reading material at that! This sounds, at this point, very interesting! Cannot wait to read further! :)
So a couple of years later... I found this story as I am desperately trying to find some new reading material and good reading material at that! This sounds, at this point, very interesting! Cannot wait to read further! :)
7/21/2010 c35 Xandrea
I absolutely loved this story. It was amazing. Loved it. You are an amazing writer. I can not wait to read your other stories. Keep writing. :)
I absolutely loved this story. It was amazing. Loved it. You are an amazing writer. I can not wait to read your other stories. Keep writing. :)