for Bad Blood5/17/2010 c11 
48Kantsu-chan
Your story is very well written with some slight errors. Some grammatically, but mostly its your setting transitioning. It confuses me a little. I would suggest looking it over and making the setting transitions more clear.
Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Bye for now.
48Kantsu-chanYour story is very well written with some slight errors. Some grammatically, but mostly its your setting transitioning. It confuses me a little. I would suggest looking it over and making the setting transitions more clear.
Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Bye for now.
4/13/2010 c12 ManicMango
Coolio! I didn't know all that about blood types. I'm special, though! Gots AB- blood. Anyways, I love your story and I plan on reading it straight through! :D
Coolio! I didn't know all that about blood types. I'm special, though! Gots AB- blood. Anyways, I love your story and I plan on reading it straight through! :D
5/3/2009 c35 11Sakiru Yume
Nice. I really liked the story. It actually took me, like, five tries to figure out what Ariadne's name was. Does her name mean something? Whatever. This was a really good story, and I'm going to read the sequel, if there is one. If there isn't, I'm going to hound you until you write one.
Bye, now.
11Sakiru YumeNice. I really liked the story. It actually took me, like, five tries to figure out what Ariadne's name was. Does her name mean something? Whatever. This was a really good story, and I'm going to read the sequel, if there is one. If there isn't, I'm going to hound you until you write one.
Bye, now.
4/23/2009 c5 DanielleB50
my 2.5 kids?
(to lazy to sign in)
my 2.5 kids?
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3/16/2009 c8 4slee5133
ok...im so confused. if sirel and jamnis are dating, why did jamnis kiss dana, and why would sirel say jamnis was jealous and why did dana kiss jamnis on the cheek and why does jamnis seem closer to dana than to sirel?
4slee5133ok...im so confused. if sirel and jamnis are dating, why did jamnis kiss dana, and why would sirel say jamnis was jealous and why did dana kiss jamnis on the cheek and why does jamnis seem closer to dana than to sirel?
2/21/2009 c1 Mia
Very intense and unexpected:) Got my attention which is a plus:D I'm trying to analyze your writing style and how to write a story while enjoying the chapter. Kinda hard when you get distracted by whats going on:P Will read on (^_^)
Very intense and unexpected:) Got my attention which is a plus:D I'm trying to analyze your writing style and how to write a story while enjoying the chapter. Kinda hard when you get distracted by whats going on:P Will read on (^_^)
11/30/2008 c35 alittleglikecupcake
Hello,
I just wanted to tell you that I loved your story. It had an original plot and kept me up until I finished it. It really was a great story. I was unable to stop reading once I started, and I ended up reading it all in one sitting. Which I think is quite an accomplishment. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to finish the next one.
Hello,
I just wanted to tell you that I loved your story. It had an original plot and kept me up until I finished it. It really was a great story. I was unable to stop reading once I started, and I ended up reading it all in one sitting. Which I think is quite an accomplishment. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to finish the next one.
10/31/2008 c1 2LettyV
Love this story! I read the first two stories and they are GREAT! Will start with the 3rd one now :D XOX Letty
2LettyVLove this story! I read the first two stories and they are GREAT! Will start with the 3rd one now :D XOX Letty
7/28/2008 c20 Jay827
are... you.. serious? really she just excused herself, cried in the bathroom and came back out. and was completely fine with it. umm ok?
are... you.. serious? really she just excused herself, cried in the bathroom and came back out. and was completely fine with it. umm ok?
7/23/2008 c1 chornoykot
I absolutely ADORE this entire series of stories. Your writing style is wonderful and the characters are so loveable! Continue writing!
I absolutely ADORE this entire series of stories. Your writing style is wonderful and the characters are so loveable! Continue writing!