for Ryan4/19/2006 c13 Alenor
heya, the ending is kinda abrupt but it's a good story. you made me cry though...why did you kill him off? ahh well, and it sucks that she had to move to hawaii, under different circumstances it mighta been great but yeah. oh well, cya later ~ Alenor.
heya, the ending is kinda abrupt but it's a good story. you made me cry though...why did you kill him off? ahh well, and it sucks that she had to move to hawaii, under different circumstances it mighta been great but yeah. oh well, cya later ~ Alenor.
12/18/2005 c13 rachel
no offense. but wtf? if you're going to write a young adult story and then kill off the male lead it has to be longer than 13 chapters. he just dies?
no offense. but wtf? if you're going to write a young adult story and then kill off the male lead it has to be longer than 13 chapters. he just dies?
12/4/2005 c13 little devil
that was so good! execpt it was so sad when ryan died!but luv it any way, o im trying to read all your story they re really gd!
that was so good! execpt it was so sad when ryan died!but luv it any way, o im trying to read all your story they re really gd!
8/5/2005 c13 
17The Aphrodite Effect
wow. this was a beautiful story. it made me cry- really hard. it brought back memories of when i was in second grade- my best friend lost her mother to cancer. she was like a second mother to me. this was an excelent story. truly amazing. it takes a lot of talent to stir up this much feeling in anyone- even if they have memories.-AS
17The Aphrodite Effectwow. this was a beautiful story. it made me cry- really hard. it brought back memories of when i was in second grade- my best friend lost her mother to cancer. she was like a second mother to me. this was an excelent story. truly amazing. it takes a lot of talent to stir up this much feeling in anyone- even if they have memories.-AS
1/21/2005 c13 me
wow...im in complete shock and awe...great writing...I wish u hand't ended it...also I'd like to say that it takes a great deal of talent to be able to end a story witha sort of incomplete sequence of events and make it seem complete...very good job indeed...I also must say that it almost made me cry which also takes great tallent for an author to move the reader to tears *or almost* great writing style and plots...i loved it so much...please continue!
wow...im in complete shock and awe...great writing...I wish u hand't ended it...also I'd like to say that it takes a great deal of talent to be able to end a story witha sort of incomplete sequence of events and make it seem complete...very good job indeed...I also must say that it almost made me cry which also takes great tallent for an author to move the reader to tears *or almost* great writing style and plots...i loved it so much...please continue!
6/11/2004 c13 desdamona77
The story flowed very nicely, read it in like, 20 minutes! I realized I liked the abrupt ending, does more for the story. Awesome!
The story flowed very nicely, read it in like, 20 minutes! I realized I liked the abrupt ending, does more for the story. Awesome!