for Seasons11/2/2004 c1 
123Raya Dronaile
very pretty poem, i loved it lots. "The turnings of the heart" i loved that phrase. great job, keep it up
123Raya Dronailevery pretty poem, i loved it lots. "The turnings of the heart" i loved that phrase. great job, keep it up
7/17/2004 c1 40singingspeechless
i loved the last stanza...it really pulled it all together. beautiful! i love ur imagery!
40singingspeechlessi loved the last stanza...it really pulled it all together. beautiful! i love ur imagery!
7/15/2004 c1 79Summerdazed
again, this is wonderful. I feel that I'm getting a bit jealous of how well you can capture the beauty of nature in words...:O)
=summerdazed=
79Summerdazedagain, this is wonderful. I feel that I'm getting a bit jealous of how well you can capture the beauty of nature in words...:O)
=summerdazed=
6/20/2004 c1 128Zainab
I really like your rhyming scheme..it's soft and not corny, unlike most poems. I like the imagery as well...it reminded me somewhat of Princess Mononoke when they're in the forest.
128ZainabI really like your rhyming scheme..it's soft and not corny, unlike most poems. I like the imagery as well...it reminded me somewhat of Princess Mononoke when they're in the forest.
6/14/2004 c1 3Pont
I am inferior! *crying* lol! good job! Great job with the imagery! It has the kind of rhythm of a sonnet. Nicely done.
~ponteh
3PontI am inferior! *crying* lol! good job! Great job with the imagery! It has the kind of rhythm of a sonnet. Nicely done.
~ponteh
6/11/2004 c1 8forgottenmoon831
That was SO good! This one's going on my favorites, I just LOVE the imagery and the way it flows so smoothly! I like the line, "As clear white fire glittering" That was so pretty, thanks for the great poem!
8forgottenmoon831That was SO good! This one's going on my favorites, I just LOVE the imagery and the way it flows so smoothly! I like the line, "As clear white fire glittering" That was so pretty, thanks for the great poem!
6/11/2004 c1 laerai
I liked how you tied it all together with the last stanza. Perhaps it should start with the spring stanza (as spring signifies birth/rebirth) and then so on to winter (signfying death) Maybe another stanza on spring to complete the circle... well no, you covered that idea quite well in the last stanza.
I liked how you tied it all together with the last stanza. Perhaps it should start with the spring stanza (as spring signifies birth/rebirth) and then so on to winter (signfying death) Maybe another stanza on spring to complete the circle... well no, you covered that idea quite well in the last stanza.