for Insomniac6/12/2004 c1 
22slave to the voices
Very deep and thought provoking. It's clear that you've suffered through bouts of insomnia, but I think you could have added more description without slowing the pace of the story. Nice work, keep writing.
**Slave**
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22slave to the voicesVery deep and thought provoking. It's clear that you've suffered through bouts of insomnia, but I think you could have added more description without slowing the pace of the story. Nice work, keep writing.
**Slave**
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6/11/2004 c1 2Purgitori
I love this. Short, sweet, simple, to the very tip of the crimson covered blade. I also found it funny. Made me think, I like that. Besides, what's is sleep, I know not of this "sleep" you speak of...*eats more choclate-covered java beans* ...ha
2PurgitoriI love this. Short, sweet, simple, to the very tip of the crimson covered blade. I also found it funny. Made me think, I like that. Besides, what's is sleep, I know not of this "sleep" you speak of...*eats more choclate-covered java beans* ...ha
6/11/2004 c1 59wilderness
hey
that was really good! thats what i think of when im trying to get to sleep! great story, lots of detailed writing
lani
59wildernesshey
that was really good! thats what i think of when im trying to get to sleep! great story, lots of detailed writing
lani