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9/18/2012 c1 Guest
wow! Stonking, I could really see it in my mind
6/11/2004 c1 Cobster
Ah.. .. I know what it is now - it's subtle, but good. It's the fact that you call the castle SHE. See, I figured it was probably a metaphor of someone's life, but that sort of made it concrete for me. You use the perfect words for it, and that helps too. I still don't get how it seems so perfect, but there's something immortal about this poem. In a strange way, it's better than anything else I've read (or written). Again, my congratulations.
6/11/2004 c1 38Aneliz Rei
very Romantic (not romantic) in tone, which I love! And its rhythm is sort of rocking, which I also appreciate:) Very nice job; I've no suggestions for improvment. -Eliz
6/11/2004 c1 76Cobster
I don't know what it is, but there's a little something extra to this poem. It's a very good poem in itself, but the formatting or the fact that I'm tired is making it better yet. I'll come back and read it later and see if that magic is still there.

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