9/18/2012 c1 Guest
wow! Stonking, I could really see it in my mind
wow! Stonking, I could really see it in my mind
6/11/2004 c1 Cobster
Ah.. .. I know what it is now - it's subtle, but good. It's the fact that you call the castle SHE. See, I figured it was probably a metaphor of someone's life, but that sort of made it concrete for me. You use the perfect words for it, and that helps too. I still don't get how it seems so perfect, but there's something immortal about this poem. In a strange way, it's better than anything else I've read (or written). Again, my congratulations.
Ah.. .. I know what it is now - it's subtle, but good. It's the fact that you call the castle SHE. See, I figured it was probably a metaphor of someone's life, but that sort of made it concrete for me. You use the perfect words for it, and that helps too. I still don't get how it seems so perfect, but there's something immortal about this poem. In a strange way, it's better than anything else I've read (or written). Again, my congratulations.
6/11/2004 c1 38Aneliz Rei
very Romantic (not romantic) in tone, which I love! And its rhythm is sort of rocking, which I also appreciate:) Very nice job; I've no suggestions for improvment. -Eliz
very Romantic (not romantic) in tone, which I love! And its rhythm is sort of rocking, which I also appreciate:) Very nice job; I've no suggestions for improvment. -Eliz