for A Beacon3/14/2006 c1 
1allidunno
this was a beautiful poem! you're an awesome poet! (i love romance, be it dramatic or cute)
1allidunnothis was a beautiful poem! you're an awesome poet! (i love romance, be it dramatic or cute)
7/14/2004 c1 81daphnegray78
Kinda sweet...but then again, kinda creepy. *sticks out her tongue* Just kidding. *smiles* I like it, though. It kinda reminds me of my poem "For Eternity"...only yours is much better! :o)
81daphnegray78Kinda sweet...but then again, kinda creepy. *sticks out her tongue* Just kidding. *smiles* I like it, though. It kinda reminds me of my poem "For Eternity"...only yours is much better! :o)
7/6/2004 c1 14arbysauce93
Creepily beautiful. I love the idea. Beautiful descriptions. I love the lines,
"And revealing the moon and stars
That had long been darkened with his blood"
Amazing poem. Keep writing!
14arbysauce93Creepily beautiful. I love the idea. Beautiful descriptions. I love the lines,
"And revealing the moon and stars
That had long been darkened with his blood"
Amazing poem. Keep writing!
6/15/2004 c1 robynd
i must say, the thing i like the most about your poems is that they deal with REAL situations and people. not that other people's poems suck because they don't deal with the same issues, it's just that yours i can relate to more.
as for this one, i particularly liked it because i've had some daydreams about it. of course, mine end differently but it's the same principle. someone trapped in their mind with a hand reaching out to help them... so i liked it for that reason especially
but i ALSO really liked it because of the imagery that you used... it was really descriptive and vivid.
later days
bells
i must say, the thing i like the most about your poems is that they deal with REAL situations and people. not that other people's poems suck because they don't deal with the same issues, it's just that yours i can relate to more.
as for this one, i particularly liked it because i've had some daydreams about it. of course, mine end differently but it's the same principle. someone trapped in their mind with a hand reaching out to help them... so i liked it for that reason especially
but i ALSO really liked it because of the imagery that you used... it was really descriptive and vivid.
later days
bells