
6/12/2004 c1 LiarXAgerate
I like! It's like the fantasy version of "The Breakfast Club." You may want to keep from revealing Hope's parents are dead until later in the story, but it's awesome as is. Keep it up!
I like! It's like the fantasy version of "The Breakfast Club." You may want to keep from revealing Hope's parents are dead until later in the story, but it's awesome as is. Keep it up!
6/12/2004 c1 404358034958034
Good, I like how you introduced all the characters in the first chapter. Update soon!
Good, I like how you introduced all the characters in the first chapter. Update soon!