for Stained Glass9/16/2004 c1 
2sinner saint
First thing i have to say is that back together is two words, not one. But that is all I can really fault with this poem. Now onto the good stuff!
wow...this is beautiful. It's so emotional and it sounds like it was written about something very personal to you. I found that the rhythm was particularly good and I like your use of imagery in the line: "shattered stained glass on the floor". Very well done!
~sinner saint
PS R&R mine?
2sinner saintFirst thing i have to say is that back together is two words, not one. But that is all I can really fault with this poem. Now onto the good stuff!
wow...this is beautiful. It's so emotional and it sounds like it was written about something very personal to you. I found that the rhythm was particularly good and I like your use of imagery in the line: "shattered stained glass on the floor". Very well done!
~sinner saint
PS R&R mine?