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8/25/2004 c1 40H. Moth
a poem within a poem...
interesting concept.
the beginning is very touching, and it's good to see the dead honored and remembered so well.
reviewer reccomended you...glad i checked out your stuff.
7/8/2004 c1 59Spootasia Tomoe
wow. i really liked that. very sad!
the poem within about the animal who turned bitter, was that an analogy to the author of the poem and the person who left? it seems like it. it really fits and is my favorite part of the poem. i congratulate you on that part because i have never seen that -what to call it...- 'technique' before and the way it seems to hint about the author's previous life makes the poem all the more compelling and moving.
6/13/2004 c1 22Just-try'en-to-speak
hmm i'm not sure i fully understand this poem but it seams very full of emotions and like it's trying to explane something through a sort story it's good

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