for The Laborious Taks on my Last Day7/8/2004 c1 
59Spootasia Tomoe
that was amazingly well written.
i really got a feel for the- what are characters of poems called?... i'll just call them doyles (ps, in a weird mood today)- emotions and needs of the...doyle.
it became incredibly easy to relate to your, um, doyle and i even recognize some of his/her desires and motivations as ones that i have used in my own dejected characters. i can certainly relate to the tiredness of life as well.
you have definately captured something in this poem and the remarkably specific feelings you show of the doyle make it very tangible, personal... i don't know. something beautiful and perhaps even slightly comforting.
i bow to thou!
59Spootasia Tomoethat was amazingly well written.
i really got a feel for the- what are characters of poems called?... i'll just call them doyles (ps, in a weird mood today)- emotions and needs of the...doyle.
it became incredibly easy to relate to your, um, doyle and i even recognize some of his/her desires and motivations as ones that i have used in my own dejected characters. i can certainly relate to the tiredness of life as well.
you have definately captured something in this poem and the remarkably specific feelings you show of the doyle make it very tangible, personal... i don't know. something beautiful and perhaps even slightly comforting.
i bow to thou!
6/13/2004 c1 22Just-try'en-to-speak
i like this poem once again cause it seams to talk about lots of things i can say i felt, i have friends like that too who try or tried to help and just seam to make it all that much worse and depressing.
22Just-try'en-to-speaki like this poem once again cause it seams to talk about lots of things i can say i felt, i have friends like that too who try or tried to help and just seam to make it all that much worse and depressing.