
7/8/2004 c1
59Spootasia Tomoe
quite a dark doyle in this one! (about 'doyle,' see my review to "The Laborious Tasks on my Last Day" ^-^)
the word flow is wonderful and the way your doyle speaks, describes (the way YOU describe, actually. being you the author and all^-^), makes your doyle all the more complex and the poem all the more insightful and enthralling.
the writing is really beautiful!

quite a dark doyle in this one! (about 'doyle,' see my review to "The Laborious Tasks on my Last Day" ^-^)
the word flow is wonderful and the way your doyle speaks, describes (the way YOU describe, actually. being you the author and all^-^), makes your doyle all the more complex and the poem all the more insightful and enthralling.
the writing is really beautiful!
6/13/2004 c1
22Just-try'en-to-speak
Hm i like this poem it's really good i like the part about the angels a lot

Hm i like this poem it's really good i like the part about the angels a lot