for A Thousand Miles2/21/2005 c1 HarlequinnGirls
Aw...that's soo cute! *sniffs* heh, well update your sweet tooth story soon!
Aw...that's soo cute! *sniffs* heh, well update your sweet tooth story soon!
8/30/2004 c1 
7Papertazuna
AHH MUSHY! jk. it was cute, romantic, enchanting...all the wonderful things short stories should be. great topic, wonderful execution. as usual helen, u never cease to amaze. i wish i didn't have gym like u...
7PapertazunaAHH MUSHY! jk. it was cute, romantic, enchanting...all the wonderful things short stories should be. great topic, wonderful execution. as usual helen, u never cease to amaze. i wish i didn't have gym like u...
8/20/2004 c1 7clarkna
I really liked how you incorporated the lyrics to Vanessa Carlton's A Thousand Miles (great song, by the way) into the story. It gave it more depth. But, I agree with A*Vision in a way, because I would have liked to see them fight and then realize that they were meant for each other. Anyways, I really enjoyed it and I hope you write more stories.
7clarknaI really liked how you incorporated the lyrics to Vanessa Carlton's A Thousand Miles (great song, by the way) into the story. It gave it more depth. But, I agree with A*Vision in a way, because I would have liked to see them fight and then realize that they were meant for each other. Anyways, I really enjoyed it and I hope you write more stories.
8/20/2004 c1 5quiksilva brumby
So cute! Kinda cliche, but thats the way it should be for romance =P hehe, well this was great, and i loved the way it was written. i wrote a one shot for Wonderwall by Oasis in this format, mayb you could check it out *hint hint* neway, i might read ur other story now or tomorrow, cause i thought this one was cool =)
keep writing!
luv ~brumbY~ xx
5quiksilva brumbySo cute! Kinda cliche, but thats the way it should be for romance =P hehe, well this was great, and i loved the way it was written. i wrote a one shot for Wonderwall by Oasis in this format, mayb you could check it out *hint hint* neway, i might read ur other story now or tomorrow, cause i thought this one was cool =)
keep writing!
luv ~brumbY~ xx
6/24/2004 c1 AlienVision
um... hello? she forgives him like that? just like that? with one measley sentence, and a ring, she fiorgives him. where's the pride, girl? where's the pride of not letting a guy run over you like a bulldozer? where's the hitting, the fights, the destruction? c'mon, girl, writing fights are fun! this takes place in a fantasyland, too. You should be happy, for getting the chance to write an amazing screaming scene. I mean when they are fighting... by the way...
lol. this was story was so sweet!
write on!
um... hello? she forgives him like that? just like that? with one measley sentence, and a ring, she fiorgives him. where's the pride, girl? where's the pride of not letting a guy run over you like a bulldozer? where's the hitting, the fights, the destruction? c'mon, girl, writing fights are fun! this takes place in a fantasyland, too. You should be happy, for getting the chance to write an amazing screaming scene. I mean when they are fighting... by the way...
lol. this was story was so sweet!
write on!
6/13/2004 c1 1kelseypaige
*Wipes a solitary tear* Aw! That was so cute. I love it. Wonderful stuff, babe. A wonderful stand-alone. The song was perfect for it- too. I love this to pieces.. hope you write something liek this again soon!
Happy writting for the future!
~Fallen Fantasist
1kelseypaige*Wipes a solitary tear* Aw! That was so cute. I love it. Wonderful stuff, babe. A wonderful stand-alone. The song was perfect for it- too. I love this to pieces.. hope you write something liek this again soon!
Happy writting for the future!
~Fallen Fantasist