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12/19/2005 c1 Sapphire Spectrum
i loved it. every second of it i loved.

'i dance when there's no one to notice mistakes/ when the music is mine' that was brilliant.

thanks - going on my faves.
12/10/2005 c1 50Chandra-Moon
Very good writing. i can realate to this. On the outside, I don't look like a little girl-but my eyes look young, and I am guilty of crying when I stub my toe, or am tired. I am guilty of giggling over the most rediculus things, and spinning like a little girl.

I really liked the line "I cry when the glass breaks like/a dream in my hand, so". Just great imagery.
10/10/2005 c1 1s m e l l . o f . r a i n
A thought-proking question... I emphasize with you.

I like the different images in each stanza, and the different concepts on each line... Nicely written.
7/20/2004 c1 Made in U.S.A
WOW I seriously do not know what to say you are brilliant :D
7/17/2004 c1 234CowGirl1987x2006
wow... great job on this.
CowGIrl
7/1/2004 c1 Angelic Hellraiser
...wow... That was beautiful!

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