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11/8/2006 c1 9PessimisticOptimism
How entrancing...it's very beautiful.
4/10/2005 c1 40SilverSpinner
Ohh. Very nice. It makes so much sense to me...I really, really like it. (Your alias-Silverchair lyrics, no? Maybe not. I dunno.)
1/7/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
OwO

~ Noelle ~
8/7/2004 c1 55APersonAndAHalf
*Sigh* Still beyond my reviewing capabilities, but this poem is just fantastic...the first stanza's kind of creepy, because of the way you start if off so gently with "I want to trace my figer down your cheek" and then go into ripping nails and hearts inside fists...great effect...
7/20/2004 c1 Made in U.S.A
Very dark and relatable. I love it.
7/17/2004 c1 234CowGirl1987x2006
wow... so much passion can come out that... really like, also can relate somewhat to that... good job on this one.
CowGirl
6/13/2004 c1 2dreaminrealities
Ok, I've said this like 6 times in the past week, but people on fictionpress just keep surprising me, this is seriously, superb. The best I've read ever. I love the flow, the words, everything. It's sad, wistful, longing, passionate, and so many other emotions that i can't even begin to disect. Also: would make super song! (think depression mode of Evanescnese (can't spell name))

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