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6/19/2004 c1 84Escapist
Man. This poem makes me feel like dancing around and screaming on the top of my lungs and hiding myself under a pile of pillows and punching something all at once, which is a wide range of emotions and I'm not too sure what to do with them. Maybe I'll just blow up. Or read the poem again.
I love it.
And hey, guess what... I'm an INFp, according to Karl Jung, too.
6/18/2004 c1 52FAKEromances
"i think in a giant blue rhapsody"
probably the best line in the whole poem...but it was all very very excellent...
6/15/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
Some lines, like the long ones look a bit out of place but it emphasizes what you are trying to say. I like the last two stanzas the most, about how you basically are losing yourself and you don't think outside of that rhapsody.. hmm I could say a lot more for this piece but it is just simply nicely written. Keep up the good work.
Jenna xx
6/14/2004 c1 55APersonAndAHalf
Not as deep...well, yes, as deep, but not as...the meaning isn't as metaphorical (yes, I like that word) as it is with most of your other poems...I actually understood it...*audience claps and cheers*...but it was still really good, and I love the last stanza.
6/13/2004 c1 33escape into reality
unrequited love sucks.
i like the subtle rhyming and overall message. fave line(s): "i think in cryptograms you see, i think in a giant blue rhapsody."
-escape into reality
6/13/2004 c1 30a e i o u and sometimes y
I really love the end to this one. It was brilliant.

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