for pristine pariah6/19/2004 c1 
84Escapist
Man. This poem makes me feel like dancing around and screaming on the top of my lungs and hiding myself under a pile of pillows and punching something all at once, which is a wide range of emotions and I'm not too sure what to do with them. Maybe I'll just blow up. Or read the poem again.
I love it.
And hey, guess what... I'm an INFp, according to Karl Jung, too.
84EscapistMan. This poem makes me feel like dancing around and screaming on the top of my lungs and hiding myself under a pile of pillows and punching something all at once, which is a wide range of emotions and I'm not too sure what to do with them. Maybe I'll just blow up. Or read the poem again.
I love it.
And hey, guess what... I'm an INFp, according to Karl Jung, too.
6/18/2004 c1 52FAKEromances
"i think in a giant blue rhapsody"
probably the best line in the whole poem...but it was all very very excellent...
52FAKEromances"i think in a giant blue rhapsody"
probably the best line in the whole poem...but it was all very very excellent...
6/15/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
Some lines, like the long ones look a bit out of place but it emphasizes what you are trying to say. I like the last two stanzas the most, about how you basically are losing yourself and you don't think outside of that rhapsody.. hmm I could say a lot more for this piece but it is just simply nicely written. Keep up the good work.
Jenna xx
119AntiPleasureSome lines, like the long ones look a bit out of place but it emphasizes what you are trying to say. I like the last two stanzas the most, about how you basically are losing yourself and you don't think outside of that rhapsody.. hmm I could say a lot more for this piece but it is just simply nicely written. Keep up the good work.
Jenna xx
6/14/2004 c1 55APersonAndAHalf
Not as deep...well, yes, as deep, but not as...the meaning isn't as metaphorical (yes, I like that word) as it is with most of your other poems...I actually understood it...*audience claps and cheers*...but it was still really good, and I love the last stanza.
55APersonAndAHalfNot as deep...well, yes, as deep, but not as...the meaning isn't as metaphorical (yes, I like that word) as it is with most of your other poems...I actually understood it...*audience claps and cheers*...but it was still really good, and I love the last stanza.
6/13/2004 c1 33escape into reality
unrequited love sucks.
i like the subtle rhyming and overall message. fave line(s): "i think in cryptograms you see, i think in a giant blue rhapsody."
-escape into reality
33escape into realityunrequited love sucks.
i like the subtle rhyming and overall message. fave line(s): "i think in cryptograms you see, i think in a giant blue rhapsody."
-escape into reality