for Even Now2/26/2006 c1 
11Abigail Marie
Awesome poem... I absolutely love the flow of it and how I can just feel the emotions behind it. Great job.
11Abigail MarieAwesome poem... I absolutely love the flow of it and how I can just feel the emotions behind it. Great job.
2/19/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
Wow I really like this, the structure is amazing as well, the last line was unexpected,but maybe that's a good thing x Weasel Within x
Wow I really like this, the structure is amazing as well, the last line was unexpected,but maybe that's a good thing x Weasel Within x
10/1/2004 c1 16Pico the Great
Great last line!
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Wow, that was enthusiastic. . . Anyway, I mean it. The whole last bit was great; from "AND" to the end. That just rocked. Fun stuff, man.
-PTG
16Pico the GreatGreat last line!
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Wow, that was enthusiastic. . . Anyway, I mean it. The whole last bit was great; from "AND" to the end. That just rocked. Fun stuff, man.
-PTG
8/28/2004 c1 3Stranger Than Fiction
Very interesting. There's something about this one that forces me to like it. Very nice.
3Stranger Than FictionVery interesting. There's something about this one that forces me to like it. Very nice.
7/1/2004 c1 25Arutha
Oh wow! That is VERY good. I'm impressed. I always want to write something to comfort the suicidal... but I'm no good at it. You on the other hand... wow.
25AruthaOh wow! That is VERY good. I'm impressed. I always want to write something to comfort the suicidal... but I'm no good at it. You on the other hand... wow.
7/1/2004 c1 5strummychick
really clever. i love the effect of using short sentences and also the structure overall. keep up great work!
5strummychickreally clever. i love the effect of using short sentences and also the structure overall. keep up great work!
6/28/2004 c1 50your guilty pleasure
that was cool. It was cryptic yet very descriptive. I really liked it- go u!
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50your guilty pleasurethat was cool. It was cryptic yet very descriptive. I really liked it- go u!
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6/14/2004 c1 74LordK
That was great. I had to read it twice, just to feel the full impact. It's the kind of poem that you can't get everything out of in the first reading. It was quite interesting, and the contrasts were lovely. Hmm... I didn't quite understand it fully. Perhaps I should read it again? It felt like it was about an aborted killing or suicide. I loved it, it was structured beautifully!
74LordKThat was great. I had to read it twice, just to feel the full impact. It's the kind of poem that you can't get everything out of in the first reading. It was quite interesting, and the contrasts were lovely. Hmm... I didn't quite understand it fully. Perhaps I should read it again? It felt like it was about an aborted killing or suicide. I loved it, it was structured beautifully!