for World So False6/22/2004 c1 
55APersonAndAHalf
I like the last four lines a lot, they kind of have this simple charm in them...very good. Write more. Or else.
~A. Person
p.s. *Scary breathing* I don't know where you live but I can find out! *Maniacal laughter*
55APersonAndAHalfI like the last four lines a lot, they kind of have this simple charm in them...very good. Write more. Or else.
~A. Person
p.s. *Scary breathing* I don't know where you live but I can find out! *Maniacal laughter*
6/15/2004 c1 34Derek Rain
Really good. Just a hint tho, from my pov, the double spaces are really hard on the eyes. other than that, really good.
just wondering if you like GC, because
Laugh, Cry,
Live, Die,
is from moving on. just wondering!
34Derek RainReally good. Just a hint tho, from my pov, the double spaces are really hard on the eyes. other than that, really good.
just wondering if you like GC, because
Laugh, Cry,
Live, Die,
is from moving on. just wondering!