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4/6/2005 c1 17Bob n Kazzi
I have to say the last two lines are my favourite. I don't know why, but they are. I think this is one of my favourites of your works, this and Even Jesus. I love your work, it's great. Sometimes a little forced, but other times just . . . well, just . . . great's not the right word. i think you get my drift though.
10/13/2004 c1 Soul of Night
Very confusing. Maybe you could have expressed it in a different way? The last two lines i liked though. Interest in a blunder, a very nice way to go.
7/12/2004 c1 9QuillKitten
Very original. In the beginging it seems like you are having a conversation with a friend, or yourself, about getting introduced. And you finally can't take it anymore and go up to her. Then through the conversation you lose your cool and you put your thoughts in the poem too. And its like a worse case scenario, but you always have a problem when someone is interested? Well you blew my mind. That ws pretty raw and confusing. Great job!
6/16/2004 c1 15SnappleKap
wow.. never saw a poem quite as original as this one. I like it alot!

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