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6/18/2004 c1 8Amber Hill
oh er.. it's always awkward to review a poem written BY a friend ABOUT their friends.. but i'm going it take it that it's not about me... (i hope). yup, it's true that cool poems don't rhyme (althought this poem is more 'hot' than cool..).
yours is moment poetry, using free verse, but i see that you also used the traditional 4-line stanza. good structure, ample use of imagery to evoke feelings.. yes, you have one very angst-y piece of work here :) i like the 'it was written in the stars' part. does it mean destiny?

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