for Past8/5/2004 c1 
25european coffee addict
Well done. I suggest to make your poems a bit longer, so that the reader learns more about the acting persons.
25european coffee addictWell done. I suggest to make your poems a bit longer, so that the reader learns more about the acting persons.
1/24/2001 c1 6Soccerbabe
I love it! This will definately be one of my favorites! This doesn't remind me of my grandmother but it reminds me of my great-grandma. I was really close to her. Good job! Keep writing!Thanks for the review :-)
6SoccerbabeI love it! This will definately be one of my favorites! This doesn't remind me of my grandmother but it reminds me of my great-grandma. I was really close to her. Good job! Keep writing!Thanks for the review :-)
1/13/2001 c1 al'Laine Aranielle id Larq
I love poetry =) and this is poetry in its simplest and perhaps most beautiful form.
I love poetry =) and this is poetry in its simplest and perhaps most beautiful form.