for Vivification6/23/2005 c1 
59Unholy Haven
This poem is a treasure! I'm just absolutely intoxicated with it, definately one of the best I've read. It has just exactly the type of sentiments and attitude that I'm looking for when I browse through this website. Beautiful, beautiful!
59Unholy HavenThis poem is a treasure! I'm just absolutely intoxicated with it, definately one of the best I've read. It has just exactly the type of sentiments and attitude that I'm looking for when I browse through this website. Beautiful, beautiful!
6/19/2004 c1 Sammy- B
Wow- the wording is awesome, I love the metaphors. Great job!
Wow- the wording is awesome, I love the metaphors. Great job!
6/18/2004 c1 74Etheral
This is good! The wording is absolutely fabulous! The metaphors are cool too. Great job dude!
74EtheralThis is good! The wording is absolutely fabulous! The metaphors are cool too. Great job dude!
6/17/2004 c1 morsmortis
I loved the words you used in this poem. THey were very descriptive and beautiful.
I loved the words you used in this poem. THey were very descriptive and beautiful.
6/16/2004 c1 25JRVillers
I love your metaphors:
A dove with crow’s eyes,
A speck on the monastery floor.
your wordage is.. mesmerizing. moments with the libertine, and most wanton of them all...
It is clear that you are in love with language, but unlike many others, you have a very astute grasp of it. As with Titanic Slumber, I am impressed.
For some reason I want to see you write something, using your language and grasp, in the style of e.e. cummings.
Have you read him? Let me know, I think you could have a whole lot of fun (and I would love to read it)
I can't thank you enough for your reviews. Reviews are few and far between, but they are a driving force behind my writing. And you, reviewing several of my poems... I love you.
25JRVillersI love your metaphors:
A dove with crow’s eyes,
A speck on the monastery floor.
your wordage is.. mesmerizing. moments with the libertine, and most wanton of them all...
It is clear that you are in love with language, but unlike many others, you have a very astute grasp of it. As with Titanic Slumber, I am impressed.
For some reason I want to see you write something, using your language and grasp, in the style of e.e. cummings.
Have you read him? Let me know, I think you could have a whole lot of fun (and I would love to read it)
I can't thank you enough for your reviews. Reviews are few and far between, but they are a driving force behind my writing. And you, reviewing several of my poems... I love you.