for Quirks Among the Orderly9/5/2004 c3 
1kelseypaige
Wow... I love this, serisouly. After reading the first chapter, I was dying laughing. I do have a question, though. WHy is Natti so mean to the entire world? Was there something in her past that triggered her anti-social-ness. I mean, no fourth grade kid actually wants to be alone. Something must've happened, right?
Anyway. Er, Love this! Update soon!
Happy writing!
~Fallen Fantasist
1kelseypaigeWow... I love this, serisouly. After reading the first chapter, I was dying laughing. I do have a question, though. WHy is Natti so mean to the entire world? Was there something in her past that triggered her anti-social-ness. I mean, no fourth grade kid actually wants to be alone. Something must've happened, right?
Anyway. Er, Love this! Update soon!
Happy writing!
~Fallen Fantasist
8/31/2004 c3 stranger
oh la i love the new revised-ness. please do update soon
oh la i love the new revised-ness. please do update soon
8/31/2004 c3 Aurelione
You know, I think it would be funny in a twisted sort of way, if Shannon died from ingesting all of those poisonous chemicals in her nailpolish.
You know, I think it would be funny in a twisted sort of way, if Shannon died from ingesting all of those poisonous chemicals in her nailpolish.
8/30/2004 c3 Adele Rising
lmfao...this is great. the main character is unique, quirky, and hilarious. cant wait for more! :D
lmfao...this is great. the main character is unique, quirky, and hilarious. cant wait for more! :D
8/30/2004 c3 4purebliss90
LOL...i love Natti's character, she's so funni. Anywayz, great chapter, plz update soon~~
4purebliss90LOL...i love Natti's character, she's so funni. Anywayz, great chapter, plz update soon~~
8/25/2004 c1 1emubadger
I love your story! I read it to a friend over the phone (complete with accents) and she was cracking up. (of course it was twelve at night and we were more than a little sugar high at the time, but anyways...) Your story is so funny! please update soon. best wishes for no writer's block (the bane of all authors)
-emubadger
1emubadgerI love your story! I read it to a friend over the phone (complete with accents) and she was cracking up. (of course it was twelve at night and we were more than a little sugar high at the time, but anyways...) Your story is so funny! please update soon. best wishes for no writer's block (the bane of all authors)
-emubadger
8/16/2004 c3 Midnight Owl
lol, awesome chapter.. especially loved the title. anyways, tired so i cant leave you a fantabulous review as i would like.. update soon!
lol, awesome chapter.. especially loved the title. anyways, tired so i cant leave you a fantabulous review as i would like.. update soon!
8/14/2004 c3 Nep
I totally ...
*mental blockage*
Good story
I totally ...
*mental blockage*
Good story
8/14/2004 c3 6Onion Ring
This is unique. That's all I have to say. Blinky and the Brain dodododododod! Natti is.. different. It's fresh. I like the fiction a lot! you better continue it or i shall make a list of different ways we can murder an author through the computer ( yes it is possible ).
6Onion RingThis is unique. That's all I have to say. Blinky and the Brain dodododododod! Natti is.. different. It's fresh. I like the fiction a lot! you better continue it or i shall make a list of different ways we can murder an author through the computer ( yes it is possible ).
8/13/2004 c3 sinceritea
ahahahhahahah! this is seriously one of the best humourous works i have seen EVER! please continue! i love the main character and i love the way you write, but the only thing left is continuing!
see ya later,
-sinceritea-
ahahahhahahah! this is seriously one of the best humourous works i have seen EVER! please continue! i love the main character and i love the way you write, but the only thing left is continuing!
see ya later,
-sinceritea-
8/12/2004 c1 2Jennifer H. Westall
hmm, this is interesting. I like your style. It's a bit unnerving at times, but I like that. It's different. Plus, I was a huge math nerd myself...still am. I absolutely love taking tests! I even took a little sample of the SAT coming out in 2005 just for the fun of it. Math is awesome! I just can't control my nerdiness. Anyway, maybe I can read more soon, when it's not 1:30 in the morning!
2Jennifer H. Westallhmm, this is interesting. I like your style. It's a bit unnerving at times, but I like that. It's different. Plus, I was a huge math nerd myself...still am. I absolutely love taking tests! I even took a little sample of the SAT coming out in 2005 just for the fun of it. Math is awesome! I just can't control my nerdiness. Anyway, maybe I can read more soon, when it's not 1:30 in the morning!
8/12/2004 c3 4angel-essence
AH! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE SOON! It's KILLING ME...this is the ONLY decent humour story on FP! Er, sorry. Ranting again. I love this =). Was that obvious? Sorry =P.
4angel-essenceAH! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE UPDATE SOON! It's KILLING ME...this is the ONLY decent humour story on FP! Er, sorry. Ranting again. I love this =). Was that obvious? Sorry =P.
8/12/2004 c3 5meg87
Hah, this is hilarious! Absoulutly hilarious! I read you're unrevised (?) version a while ago and I just read your revised version and I love it! I've never read a story that could make me laugh so hard. Even when it's not ment to be funny, I'll laugh. lol then again I'm the type of person that someone could say hello and i'd be like HAHAHAH HILARIOUS! SO FUNNY! *hypervenalates* (curse me, and my spelling abilities!) But really- this story, It's just..just..genius! Don't ever stop writing it, or I'll HUNT. YOU. DOWN. ..*cough* ..right. Well, I better go..it's like 2:00 in the morning and my moms getting mad because I keep laughing at your story.. she's like "MEGAN! ARE YOU DYING! CUZ IF YOU AR-*snores*" .. She loves me I swear! Somewhere..somehow.. I think..right? MEANIE!. *sigh* ..lol I'm leaving now, I promise. Bye!
-Meg!
P.S. Keep it up!: )
5meg87Hah, this is hilarious! Absoulutly hilarious! I read you're unrevised (?) version a while ago and I just read your revised version and I love it! I've never read a story that could make me laugh so hard. Even when it's not ment to be funny, I'll laugh. lol then again I'm the type of person that someone could say hello and i'd be like HAHAHAH HILARIOUS! SO FUNNY! *hypervenalates* (curse me, and my spelling abilities!) But really- this story, It's just..just..genius! Don't ever stop writing it, or I'll HUNT. YOU. DOWN. ..*cough* ..right. Well, I better go..it's like 2:00 in the morning and my moms getting mad because I keep laughing at your story.. she's like "MEGAN! ARE YOU DYING! CUZ IF YOU AR-*snores*" .. She loves me I swear! Somewhere..somehow.. I think..right? MEANIE!. *sigh* ..lol I'm leaving now, I promise. Bye!
-Meg!
P.S. Keep it up!: )
8/5/2004 c3 21Black Seraphim
I really love this story, it's so amazing. I've read it fifteen-million times (obvious exaggeration)and every time I read it I found something new to laugh at, or just to think about. Natti is such an amazingly unique character, but distinctly believable. The way she thinks and approaches things reminds me of myself a little (though my parents would never let me dye my hair pink or have a hamster). I can't wait to see where Natti will go next with her "pseudo-friendship" with Blinky. Update soon! Please? Pretty please with sugar and slurpes and other yummy things on top?
21Black SeraphimI really love this story, it's so amazing. I've read it fifteen-million times (obvious exaggeration)and every time I read it I found something new to laugh at, or just to think about. Natti is such an amazingly unique character, but distinctly believable. The way she thinks and approaches things reminds me of myself a little (though my parents would never let me dye my hair pink or have a hamster). I can't wait to see where Natti will go next with her "pseudo-friendship" with Blinky. Update soon! Please? Pretty please with sugar and slurpes and other yummy things on top?