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7/24/2004 c2 21Chocolate Herrings
Parents can get uptight about the weirdest things...
"Lint from your navel makes a handy fire starter. Warning: Remove lint from navel before applying the match."
7/24/2004 c1 Chocolate Herrings
It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back! It's back!
7/23/2004 c3 Lily
7/21/2004 c3 ladydragon317
your story is really really funny. congrats on your sucess cant waite to read more
7/21/2004 c3 Miss Kismet
I absolutely adore this.
7/21/2004 c1 Miss Kismet
This is genius, I love it.
7/21/2004 c3 6concordance
That was a very funny chapter.
my favorite parts being:
...I stopped. Uh oh, looks like they got that window open. Preparing to go down fighting, I turned around -
- and found myself face to face with Blinky.
What else was there to do? I screamed and threw my handful of flowers at him...
...That night, we were eating dinner downstairs when, sure enough -
DoorSlam - DogGoThump!
I took a sip of orange juice as a personal reward while everyone else looked up at the ceiling...
lol. I could envision that scene in a movie
Excellent work. I love Natti. But then, that's not an original comment huh?
Okay. Well...
And thank you for r/ring Psychotic and Pampered. Glad you like it. lol...
7/21/2004 c3 13The UGLY American
7/20/2004 c3 precocious
TOTALLY LOVED THAT! I loved it! It was so funny... Natti rocks. :D And Zach.. he's just really funny. And persistent. Why WAS she killing off purple flowers? And why does she call her dad Christopher? And what IS the bathroom scene all about? DARNIT WOMAN, UPDATE! :P I really love it. The ending's fine, so don't worry about it... i actually want an M&M tshirt.. heh.. and UGH to shannon. :D heehe. well, we all gotta have our stereotypes, eh? ok then.. not making any sense... :D update soon! :D
7/20/2004 c3 5Shaking Leaf
YES! FINALLY SHE UPDATES!...i feel like a camel...after a long time in desert and no water...i finally get to come home and read this...oh ho ho...hilarity..

your lists are always so funny..blunt, effective and so very logical...(in a twisted way, of course)...flowers, not as aerodynamic (or lethal) as forks, of course...hahah she screams so easily...crazy psycho Natti...drive a compass...i mean of all things, a compass? your creativity is unmatched...plus her violence is hilarious..it's not the silly weird violence..it's very logical...i mean, someone's following you home, of course you'd want to run him over with a car, right? ^^...so funny so great...update soon...!
7/20/2004 c3 5aiur
LOL here i go laughing again and again and again ... brilliant, girl =) i remember the last version very, very faintly though, so i can't really copare the two. but this chapter was hilarious. though i seem to recall chapter three of the other version was, too. hmm ... you're writing more maturely now. it's not just all humour, and not every line is about quirkiness and all that (though i'm not complaining about when it was). excellent job, as always. keep going =)
7/18/2004 c2 Christine
When are you going to update?
I'm dying to know what what happens next...
i've read alot of stories about people who have serious attitude problems but Natti is definately very interesting!
Write the next chapter already!
7/15/2004 c2 precocious
you know what? this may well be my favourite story on this site. it's got everything i love in one: wit, humour (same thing? Whatever..) funky charactesr, original plot, no misspellings, good pace... :D i LOVE IT! UPDATE FASTER, WILL YA? :P Yeah, i only pester those whose work i absolutely ADORE. :D heehee. anyway, i completely love it. and what shade of pink is her hair anyway? and how long is it? i'm trying to imagine it, see. :D hehehe and i love zach.. he sounds really cool... not the typical punk rocker rebel guy... since he's trying to befriend natti and all.. and i LOVED the first chapter, where you described the whole clique tables thing. reminded me of mean girls. that was really funny. :D anyway, i ADORE THIS STORY so PUHLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY! Darn it, I wish i had found this before you took all the chapters down... and that Einstein quote is way cool... all of his quotes are really spiffy. :D i wonder what's gonna happen with zach and natti. something tells me it's not gonna be a very conventional road to them finally being together... :D please update! love this TONS!
7/6/2004 c2 Amandine Daumier
I love the story and its weirdness! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH it's just like me! !
Please continue! TEE HEE HEE HEE HEE!
7/5/2004 c2 2Stinariffic
hilarious , update soon
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