
7/3/2004 c2
4chthonical
Deserves two thumbs up-unless we take into consideration what two thumbs up really stand for. Not the good thing, the other thing.
You know what? I'm just totally hopeless at compliments. Totally botched that one up. I just found this story and already I plan to keep an eye on it. Natti rox and I want more!

Deserves two thumbs up-unless we take into consideration what two thumbs up really stand for. Not the good thing, the other thing.
You know what? I'm just totally hopeless at compliments. Totally botched that one up. I just found this story and already I plan to keep an eye on it. Natti rox and I want more!
7/1/2004 c2
6concordance
It was only by chance I found this. lol. And I'm glad I did. Tehe.
I didn't know what had happened to the old one...and I s'pose I'm an old reader...
But this was a very good chapter. Natti's not as "Weird" as I'd initially thought. On the contrary she's quite normal in comparison to some students I go to school with.
In SOME respect.
Other than that, I like her. And Zach, though I don't know much about him except that he's quite persistent.
Well, that's all for now.
Great job!
-Veronica (my old pen-name used to be V.R.H, just thought I'd mention that)
P.S could you maybe check out a story of mine, "Psychotic and Pampered" or "Sincerely, Your Biggest Fan" ? You don't have to, but I've got them on my mind and thought I'd mention THAT too. lol.
Forgive my annoyance.

It was only by chance I found this. lol. And I'm glad I did. Tehe.
I didn't know what had happened to the old one...and I s'pose I'm an old reader...
But this was a very good chapter. Natti's not as "Weird" as I'd initially thought. On the contrary she's quite normal in comparison to some students I go to school with.
In SOME respect.
Other than that, I like her. And Zach, though I don't know much about him except that he's quite persistent.
Well, that's all for now.
Great job!
-Veronica (my old pen-name used to be V.R.H, just thought I'd mention that)
P.S could you maybe check out a story of mine, "Psychotic and Pampered" or "Sincerely, Your Biggest Fan" ? You don't have to, but I've got them on my mind and thought I'd mention THAT too. lol.
Forgive my annoyance.
6/27/2004 c2 Aurelione
PLease post soon! I wasn't blessed enough to find out about "Quirks Among the Orderly" before you took it all down!
PLease post soon! I wasn't blessed enough to find out about "Quirks Among the Orderly" before you took it all down!
6/27/2004 c1 Aurelione
"He didn't deserve a 2B, so I extracted a 3H and slammed it on his desk." - that line was hilarious. A tip I'll have to remember when the stupid tests roll around again.
"He didn't deserve a 2B, so I extracted a 3H and slammed it on his desk." - that line was hilarious. A tip I'll have to remember when the stupid tests roll around again.
6/25/2004 c2 Killer Nacho
Yes! I love the new version! It's just as good and funny (or even more) than the older version. Hilarious work, and it'll only be a few days until all your old readers come back and review! I need more chapters. MORE CHAPTERS! @_@
Yes! I love the new version! It's just as good and funny (or even more) than the older version. Hilarious work, and it'll only be a few days until all your old readers come back and review! I need more chapters. MORE CHAPTERS! @_@
6/21/2004 c2 hummer
OMG.. you have NO idea how glad I am that you FINALLY updated! Gosh.. this chapter is as funny as ever... and.. i dont exactly know what changes you made to the first chapter.. but o well... heh.. I like Zach.. he's funny.. haha.. hope it wont take months and months and months for you to update AGAIN! ~MUA~ love you lots.. and the story... :P
OMG.. you have NO idea how glad I am that you FINALLY updated! Gosh.. this chapter is as funny as ever... and.. i dont exactly know what changes you made to the first chapter.. but o well... heh.. I like Zach.. he's funny.. haha.. hope it wont take months and months and months for you to update AGAIN! ~MUA~ love you lots.. and the story... :P
6/21/2004 c2 Midnight Owl
i read your original version but i have to say i like this better. i dont know why.. it seems a bit more.. i don't know. i love natti though, she's fabulous. so funny. lol. and blinkie. haha, i remember that from last time. and i read your note from last chapter... it's actually good that not ALL lines are going to be funny. it makes it a little more realistic. i love it. update again soon, please!
i read your original version but i have to say i like this better. i dont know why.. it seems a bit more.. i don't know. i love natti though, she's fabulous. so funny. lol. and blinkie. haha, i remember that from last time. and i read your note from last chapter... it's actually good that not ALL lines are going to be funny. it makes it a little more realistic. i love it. update again soon, please!
6/21/2004 c2 Mint
Was a great read :) I read the old one but I think the revised one is very much better :) Great job!
The story's funny in a different way, and the main character's hilarious. All those plans of dominating the world ... crack me up, and the starting chemistry between her and Zachary is amazing. I just love how you've portrayed her out to be someone who's strong enough to defend herself. Nice!
Update soon! :)
Was a great read :) I read the old one but I think the revised one is very much better :) Great job!
The story's funny in a different way, and the main character's hilarious. All those plans of dominating the world ... crack me up, and the starting chemistry between her and Zachary is amazing. I just love how you've portrayed her out to be someone who's strong enough to defend herself. Nice!
Update soon! :)
6/19/2004 c2 scissor sex
I notice one difference. Old Quote- Natti: Their priorities need to be straightened. Forcefully, if required. It was changed to Natti: Their priorities need to be straightened. Ignore the mocking hordes. The only noticeable change for the worse that I can spot right now! Change that back right now, I demand it of you!
Ahem. Besides that, all is good and well and good in this world and Hahahaha Natti is so funny. You¡¯re so funny! I reviewed your other poems AND ¡°The Yellow Umbrella.¡± =D
I notice one difference. Old Quote- Natti: Their priorities need to be straightened. Forcefully, if required. It was changed to Natti: Their priorities need to be straightened. Ignore the mocking hordes. The only noticeable change for the worse that I can spot right now! Change that back right now, I demand it of you!
Ahem. Besides that, all is good and well and good in this world and Hahahaha Natti is so funny. You¡¯re so funny! I reviewed your other poems AND ¡°The Yellow Umbrella.¡± =D
6/18/2004 c2 Zem
This is really great! I love it. It's really well done. Funny. Natti is so cool.
This is really great! I love it. It's really well done. Funny. Natti is so cool.
6/17/2004 c2 Arbor
So I loved the first version, but I do think I like this one even better.
Of course now my mother thinks I'm totally retarded, as I keep cackling over this, and repeating lines under my breath. Like I did with the radio the other day, with the "I've lost control of my left eyelid."
*loves, loves*
So I loved the first version, but I do think I like this one even better.
Of course now my mother thinks I'm totally retarded, as I keep cackling over this, and repeating lines under my breath. Like I did with the radio the other day, with the "I've lost control of my left eyelid."
*loves, loves*
6/17/2004 c2
35pixy-dizzy
^^ I LOVE THIS! I LOVE NATTI! SHE'S SO AWESOME! *deep breath* Sorry. But I really do love her character. ^^ Anyway, update soon! (And Christopher sounds kinda abusive...but maybe it's just me...)

^^ I LOVE THIS! I LOVE NATTI! SHE'S SO AWESOME! *deep breath* Sorry. But I really do love her character. ^^ Anyway, update soon! (And Christopher sounds kinda abusive...but maybe it's just me...)
6/17/2004 c2 Kaze-kun
Definitely changed, but still just as humorous. Applause:D
Definitely changed, but still just as humorous. Applause:D
6/17/2004 c2
5aiur
i'm laughing out loud now. this is just so funny. probably 'cause i haven't read it for a loong time ... *cough* ... but yes i totally remember this! hilarious. keep up the great work i love this fic. and you're right you barely changed it. but that's absolutely fine i adore it, hehe. just don't leave it like that again lol.
~k8

i'm laughing out loud now. this is just so funny. probably 'cause i haven't read it for a loong time ... *cough* ... but yes i totally remember this! hilarious. keep up the great work i love this fic. and you're right you barely changed it. but that's absolutely fine i adore it, hehe. just don't leave it like that again lol.
~k8
6/17/2004 c1 aiur
OMG YOU'RE BACK! yay! do you know just how long i've waited for you to come back? lol ... this is awesome i liked your old version, and i like this one, too! =D you're so coming back on my favourite list hehe sorry i just got annoyed of waiting. but i'm here now!
~k8
OMG YOU'RE BACK! yay! do you know just how long i've waited for you to come back? lol ... this is awesome i liked your old version, and i like this one, too! =D you're so coming back on my favourite list hehe sorry i just got annoyed of waiting. but i'm here now!
~k8