
5/12/2005 c1
1Lynet Nar
This sounds interesting, but it went a little fast. Maybe you could slow the pace down a little. Hmm.. It sounds a little like Now and Again, but not too much... You have some good ideas. I'd read more of your work, but unfortunately, I'm tired and have to go to class tomorrow.

This sounds interesting, but it went a little fast. Maybe you could slow the pace down a little. Hmm.. It sounds a little like Now and Again, but not too much... You have some good ideas. I'd read more of your work, but unfortunately, I'm tired and have to go to class tomorrow.
6/24/2004 c1 anon
Great story, you should use spell check before posting your stories though. I love you and will miss you when you leave. Have fun & stay out of trouble. M
Great story, you should use spell check before posting your stories though. I love you and will miss you when you leave. Have fun & stay out of trouble. M