
11/29/2004 c1
90poetic abortion
Your poetry is very emotional. With extrodinary detsaol ! You have a gift to poetry that is well conveyed in this peice. (It's my fav. of yours.) Good job !
~ Noelle ~=^n-n^=

Your poetry is very emotional. With extrodinary detsaol ! You have a gift to poetry that is well conveyed in this peice. (It's my fav. of yours.) Good job !
~ Noelle ~=^n-n^=
6/21/2004 c1
1Jimmy Jazz
Very interesting concept, and written out very well. As the stanzas continued, they got better. The first stanza, however, would be quite weak if it wasn't for the last line. The rest is fantastic. Great work.

Very interesting concept, and written out very well. As the stanzas continued, they got better. The first stanza, however, would be quite weak if it wasn't for the last line. The rest is fantastic. Great work.
6/17/2004 c1
35rocket baby doll
yeah. stereotypes suck. and do you know whats even worse? when you look and act different from the stereotype! then people get soo confused... give you funny looks... but it is funny to watch people try and understand an indian punk girl... it makes me laugh anyways...

yeah. stereotypes suck. and do you know whats even worse? when you look and act different from the stereotype! then people get soo confused... give you funny looks... but it is funny to watch people try and understand an indian punk girl... it makes me laugh anyways...