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10/3/2006 c1 1MyNameIsMad
Hey, hey! Sorry I haven't reviewed anything by you yet, and thanks so very, very, very much for reading Urf. I like this, I like how humans don't seem to be the main focus, and how there are different colonies of different magical creatures. What kinds of creatures live in the underground colony? Dwarves? Drow? Something completely different? Ah well, I guess I'll just have to keep on checking back to figure that out! And as for the title...well, again I haven't read anything besides this prolgue, so I can't really add anything there. Sorry. :( Thanks again for reviewing Urf! And I'll put you on my favorite author list now!

-Mad
9/30/2006 c1 22effervescent-sentiments
I'd like to see where this is going- you could just have it be a story, or you could address some very controversial issues such as racism. Have fun.Try editing it a bit more, though. I'm a freak and misspellings and grammar mistakes bug me.

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