for Destinys Demons3/3/2005 c3 
37Lilyoftheflames
O_O WOAH! Man you really changed this one up! I like this version though! And who wrote the message? WHAT HAPPENED TO SCARLETT? Man so many questions hehe! I hope you update soon! ~lilyoftheflames
37LilyoftheflamesO_O WOAH! Man you really changed this one up! I like this version though! And who wrote the message? WHAT HAPPENED TO SCARLETT? Man so many questions hehe! I hope you update soon! ~lilyoftheflames
11/28/2004 c2 Lilyoftheflames
Hm...that was different than the first time. You made Yugi older huh? Anywayz I still like it! Update soon! I'll be waiting!~lilyoftheflames
Hm...that was different than the first time. You made Yugi older huh? Anywayz I still like it! Update soon! I'll be waiting!~lilyoftheflames
11/26/2004 c2 Granite Claws
0.0 Eep! EEP! Action picking up already? v.v I could never write like this...
0.0 Eep! EEP! Action picking up already? v.v I could never write like this...
11/26/2004 c1 Granite Claws
o.0 I never read the original so... ^^ I think this is good anyway! I'm just going to guess now that Zvian was the guy who burnt up Jerico. I know I'm wrong tho...only read the first chapter... @...=
o.0 I never read the original so... ^^ I think this is good anyway! I'm just going to guess now that Zvian was the guy who burnt up Jerico. I know I'm wrong tho...only read the first chapter... @...=
11/25/2004 c2 10mute-demon81
Woot! New review of doom! o.o mysterious blue eyed man of doom? dundundun! Its been quite a while since you've updated! Glad to see you're alive, and that your stories were alive as well!
10mute-demon81Woot! New review of doom! o.o mysterious blue eyed man of doom? dundundun! Its been quite a while since you've updated! Glad to see you're alive, and that your stories were alive as well!
9/30/2004 c2 29Granite Claws
...August 7? Dude, its September 29!
Oh well, experiencing delays, I presume?
29Granite Claws...August 7? Dude, its September 29!
Oh well, experiencing delays, I presume?
8/29/2004 c1 10mute-demon81
Evil, flaming, and...tea...I like Zvian, all for those reasons! I also like, how Scarlett is just somewhat there for the ride. I'm also glad you didn't let her drown in self pity to become a fat grumpy housewife! Keep writing ^.^
10mute-demon81Evil, flaming, and...tea...I like Zvian, all for those reasons! I also like, how Scarlett is just somewhat there for the ride. I'm also glad you didn't let her drown in self pity to become a fat grumpy housewife! Keep writing ^.^
7/13/2004 c1 Babbit Agin
Hey! R u gonna make mor of this storie?
Hey! R u gonna make mor of this storie?
7/5/2004 c1 Babbit
Please right more storey! Its very good!1, and I wuld relly like to reed more about Scarlett, she seems enteresting!11
Please right more storey! Its very good!1, and I wuld relly like to reed more about Scarlett, she seems enteresting!11
6/21/2004 c1 Johnny
This is quite an interesting start, alot different from the other version of this story. I believe it makes it possible to become more attatached to the characters because there is more interaction! Keep up the good work!
This is quite an interesting start, alot different from the other version of this story. I believe it makes it possible to become more attatached to the characters because there is more interaction! Keep up the good work!
6/19/2004 c1 37Lilyoftheflames
WOO HOO! You revised! Not that the other one was bad though! I can't say wether it's better or worse b/c it's a totally different way of starting! But I did like this beginning! Keep it up and update really soon! I'll be waiting! ~ko
37LilyoftheflamesWOO HOO! You revised! Not that the other one was bad though! I can't say wether it's better or worse b/c it's a totally different way of starting! But I did like this beginning! Keep it up and update really soon! I'll be waiting! ~ko