for Memories of My Heart6/19/2004 c1 
40Aleonic Relic
A good poem, the flow was good though I thought some parts were a bit iffy. The emotions you were feeling when you wrote this was clearly shown, nice poem.
40Aleonic RelicA good poem, the flow was good though I thought some parts were a bit iffy. The emotions you were feeling when you wrote this was clearly shown, nice poem.
6/19/2004 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
so sad... oh but such a good poem! i liked it. have no way for you to get over someone. all i can say is that over time it will disappear. which bites a lot actually. but from expirience its the only way i know. wish i could help more though. hope youll be okay :)
3Cry Tears of Darknessso sad... oh but such a good poem! i liked it. have no way for you to get over someone. all i can say is that over time it will disappear. which bites a lot actually. but from expirience its the only way i know. wish i could help more though. hope youll be okay :)
6/19/2004 c1 15littlemarenengh
wow...ok well i'm only 13 so that hasn't happened yet...lol. That was really good...it showed your emotions so well...good job!
well done,
~maren~
p.s.-PLEASE R&R my pieces
15littlemarenenghwow...ok well i'm only 13 so that hasn't happened yet...lol. That was really good...it showed your emotions so well...good job!
well done,
~maren~
p.s.-PLEASE R&R my pieces