for Camp Surprises5/16/2006 c9 cursed-x-oblivion
the length of the chapter is getting to me. but im a little bit patient for the next chapter. wait, can't wait!
the length of the chapter is getting to me. but im a little bit patient for the next chapter. wait, can't wait!
5/30/2005 c1 
22kp-828
This is such a fun story. you have a very great style that just makes you want to keep reading it. so this is why it kills me that you haven't finished it yet. by the way this is probably the most fun story i've read on here (I promise i'm not sucking up. It honestly is) good luck and keep on keepin on
22kp-828This is such a fun story. you have a very great style that just makes you want to keep reading it. so this is why it kills me that you haven't finished it yet. by the way this is probably the most fun story i've read on here (I promise i'm not sucking up. It honestly is) good luck and keep on keepin on
4/12/2005 c9 2Hexic
hey. nice story. its really good. the chapters are kinda short... but thats just because id love to read more each timeanyways my advice to you is to make your author nots in bold or something so that they are seperated from the text of the story. it just makes it easier to find the beginning of the story.
nice work.
~Hexic~
2Hexichey. nice story. its really good. the chapters are kinda short... but thats just because id love to read more each timeanyways my advice to you is to make your author nots in bold or something so that they are seperated from the text of the story. it just makes it easier to find the beginning of the story.
nice work.
~Hexic~
3/30/2005 c9 157darkmistresslae
enough with the messages to people and more of the story! please? thanks! it's a good story! I can't wait until the capture the flag scene, sounds good. JUST HAVE THEM GO OUT ALREADY AIR CONDITIONER! *dies in suspense*
just write more! during history class!
*hugs and love*
me
157darkmistresslaeenough with the messages to people and more of the story! please? thanks! it's a good story! I can't wait until the capture the flag scene, sounds good. JUST HAVE THEM GO OUT ALREADY AIR CONDITIONER! *dies in suspense*
just write more! during history class!
*hugs and love*
me
3/29/2005 c9 3unerasable words
You're back! It's okay. About the names, lol, as long as if I can understand what's going on. I have The Notebook but it doesn't seem to work on my player. I wanna watch it so badly! Okay, VERY off topic. Update soon!
3unerasable wordsYou're back! It's okay. About the names, lol, as long as if I can understand what's going on. I have The Notebook but it doesn't seem to work on my player. I wanna watch it so badly! Okay, VERY off topic. Update soon!
3/28/2005 c9 Baseball-baybee
Hey! I lvoe ur story...Update soon!
Hey! I lvoe ur story...Update soon!
3/28/2005 c9 54rainkisser
It was good... but it seemed a little random, well, not random, but like it was in an awekward place. What WAS the pervy way Sean new how to play capture the flag? Did that question even make sense? not really, but you know what I mean! hehe. anyway... UPDATE! much love -Mia
54rainkisserIt was good... but it seemed a little random, well, not random, but like it was in an awekward place. What WAS the pervy way Sean new how to play capture the flag? Did that question even make sense? not really, but you know what I mean! hehe. anyway... UPDATE! much love -Mia
1/20/2005 c8 157darkmistresslae
omg, I'm scared ac. a much more fun way to play it? uh oh... I can sense something. LOl. I really like this story. I'm no good at romance and happy stuff, so no suggestions there except KEEP WRITING! and go look at my stuff too! on this penname. I hvae so much up that you just have to read hon. I really like this story, it gets better and better each time I look at it. just make the chapters longer! and update soon!
157darkmistresslaeomg, I'm scared ac. a much more fun way to play it? uh oh... I can sense something. LOl. I really like this story. I'm no good at romance and happy stuff, so no suggestions there except KEEP WRITING! and go look at my stuff too! on this penname. I hvae so much up that you just have to read hon. I really like this story, it gets better and better each time I look at it. just make the chapters longer! and update soon!
1/18/2005 c7 daydreamer
argh.. it s so great! update update update!
argh.. it s so great! update update update!
1/18/2005 c7 daydreamer
argh.. it s so great! update update update!
argh.. it s so great! update update update!
1/18/2005 c7 daydreamer
argh.. it s so great! update update update!
argh.. it s so great! update update update!
1/18/2005 c8 daydreamer
omg omg omg~ its so good! hehe.. i sound so ditzy..good stories make me so high! u HAVE to update! must! im going to die in anticipation.. please update~ ^^
omg omg omg~ its so good! hehe.. i sound so ditzy..good stories make me so high! u HAVE to update! must! im going to die in anticipation.. please update~ ^^
1/17/2005 c1 1atlantis fairytale
this is so great! i love it i love it i love it! lol.. sory.. excellent story. =D
1atlantis fairytalethis is so great! i love it i love it i love it! lol.. sory.. excellent story. =D
1/15/2005 c8 54rainkisser
nice, cute chapter! an idea for thou... have a late arrival come to camp...how about...SEAN'S EX! bumbumBUM! THAT WILL GET COMPLICATING! anyway, nice job! MUCH LOVE -Mia PS: call me about st udying and iceskating today, i tried to call but you weren't there.
54rainkissernice, cute chapter! an idea for thou... have a late arrival come to camp...how about...SEAN'S EX! bumbumBUM! THAT WILL GET COMPLICATING! anyway, nice job! MUCH LOVE -Mia PS: call me about st udying and iceskating today, i tried to call but you weren't there.